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And So The Flame Dance

Updated on July 24, 2011

I turn up the music
The music so slow
The music that my grandparent dance to
When their life still glow

I saw a candle light before me

It flickers…

I looked into it carefully
And I saw a picture

Again I glance to it
To make sure

And I did see a picture

A picture that I see
Was them in it
Dancing within the flame

To the music that I played

They spin to the air so high
And twirl unto the wind
It really amazed me to see

The image of my grandparent dancing


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      Christopher Dapo and S. 6 years ago from Havelock, NC

      Very beautiful, chanroth!!

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Thank you Christ...:)

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      Brian 6 years ago from Utah

      Very beautiful. Nothing like the visuals that a good poem gives!

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      Jaspal Singh 6 years ago from India / Australia

      Really wonderful, Chanroth.

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Thank you Ibbarkingmad and Jaspal! I'll make sure to check you out! :)

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      Malinda 6 years ago

      Ahh chanroth, you finally tell the story. Wonderfully written darling! Mrs. Marshall would love to read this! *smile*

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      Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Very nice! Where did you get the picture? You're right--the flame looks like two people dancing. Beautiful poem!

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Victoria, thanks. I googled it. lol :)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Chanroth.. this is absolutley beautiful.. Your fingers are like magic.. Blessing


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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      I agree with Deborah... this is beautiful, and magical!!

      Please keep writing chanroth


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