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Poetry-Poem-Set You Free

Updated on December 12, 2011

Set You Free

You gave me your stength

now I give it back

Patience, my friend

the one thing I lack.

 

You gave me your laughter

I let it go free

My heart was torn

with pain and misery.

 

You gave me your time

It was never enough

the days were so long

the nights were so tough.

 

You gave me your hand

but I couldn't take it

you couldn't hang on

I couldn't fake it.

 

You gave and gave

so generously to me

now I give it all back

I set you free.

VLH

 

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank You! nighthag-so absolutly true! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment-greatly appreciated

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    K.A.E Grove 7 years ago from Australia

    Beautiful, sometimes the best way to show love, is to step back and let others go, a lovely poem

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Cracknutcase**Yes** I believe that also- Thank you!

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    Cracknutcase 7 years ago from India,bangalore

    Beautiful poem :) I believe if u set someone free, they're gonna come back to u if u were meant to be.. All u gotta do is wait and watch :)

    Good Luck my dear !

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank You Rhonda- Thank you for commenting.

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    Rhonda Musch 7 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Lovely poem. Well done. excellent read.

    Thanks for sharing your poem with us.

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank You-Moonwillow Lake @ KristenGrace--Thank You for commenting..Happy New Year

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    KristenGrace 7 years ago from Philadelphia, PA

    Very thought-provoking and interesting poem. Nice flow and easy read, yet so much meaning behind the few words. Lovely job :)

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    Moon Willow Lake 7 years ago

    Very nicely done - thanks for the thoughts....

  • IN2Deep profile image
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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank You----Sometimes,very true!

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    kennynext 7 years ago from Everywhere

    Sometimes the things we set free come back to us. A very writing job.

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