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Shattered Beauty

Updated on April 5, 2014
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Beautiful

but the shell is melting away

like tears through mascara

finding refuge in fibers

staining her snow white dress

inkblots appear

angels crying

devils mirth

but she dances on

as strong as iron

and harder than stone

kingdoms fall

at a woman's groan

barefoot pirouette

through clouded eyes

she allows him

beautiful

but it is shattered

and falls like pieces

of porcelain from a doll

tinkling on tile

like her toes

he takes her

and she dances under the moonlight

she dances in the twighlight

she dances under the dim yellow light

that casts its pallor over the kitchen

she dances for him

and he takes her

there on floral covered formica

beautiful

melting down the drain

he tap dances away

and porcelain pricks his heel

while she picks up broken pieces

and with them

applies a smile to her face

because as he slumbers

poison is setting in

and under hells light

she will dance upon his grave



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      Ezekiel Hawk 3 years ago from India

      What an awesome ending. It was very unexpected.

      You are a Great writer, Man!

      Count me in as your new fan.

      (Wow. I made that rhyme)

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      Vincent Moore 3 years ago

      Wow, I didn't expect that ending either, however a great poet like yourself uses the macabre very gallantly, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, I wonder what she had on her mind wild conjuring up such a poisonous plan. I loved it Wayne, you never fail to deliver my poetic brother.

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      Alexandra 3 years ago

      Oh I just love this! What an ending! What a terrible cost for such love.

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Scary ending Bro. Otherwise quite beautiful.

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago

      Jesus...me thinks i'll be sleeping with one eye open - AND letting HER taste all my food first!

      This is just amazing, Wayne - i have chills!

      (And don't think i missed that gorgeous painting either!)

      sharingxx

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      bizarrett81 3 years ago from Maine

      Love this! Nice to see a poem by you again!!

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Oh my! Scary and well expressed!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Brilliantly written, great turn around! Memorable lines worth reading again. Thank you. Jamie

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      I love your poetry Wayne. A few of your poems were the first I read on Hub pages and they inspired me. This is no exception, you put the "creepy' into 'Macabre". Great ending. Voted 'awesome'.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Ezekiel.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you very much Vincent.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thanks for dropping in on the hub with a comment, Alexandra. I do appreciate it.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Manatita.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Karen for the nice comment on the poem and the painting.

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You are definitely one of the best poets on this site. Well done, Wayne.

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Wow, Wayne. At first I thought the poem was about how a woman ages; losing her outer beauty while still being beautiful on the outside. And then, bam! I was not expecting that ending! Guess he did something to piss her off!!

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Beth...my #1 fan.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Vellur.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Unexpected ending--love it when you do creepy!

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Jamie.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Jodah, I appreciate the compliment and the support.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Billy, your compliment can make a man's day.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Hi, Sha. Gotta keep em guessing, right? :)

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      Ann Carr 3 years ago from SW England

      This is amazing. It's so well crafted and you keep us going right to the last line; that's suspense at it's best. Ann

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      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Shattered Beauty - simply beautiful.... With an amazing ending! Wonderful poem.....

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      The poem is haunting. The ending is statistically all too true. She will outlive him. The creepy, macabre thing about the statistic is that people are so tragically oblivious to the obvious when it comes to taking care of themselves. The poison given may well have been the rich foods he wanted which she fed him. It probably hastened the fall of her own beauty, as well.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      WOW this was incredible and a bit scary and that ending gave me the shivers.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Audrey, thank you very much.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Ann

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      LaThing, thank you so much.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Nellieanna, it's always a pleasure! Thank you my dear friend.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you very much, Rasma.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Creator made everything wonderful and pleasing for us and we get delighted in all pleasures except His last finishing touch ! When I read this poem, the climax resembles that touch ! Wayne, I love your creativity. Voted up.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Wayne,

      What a powerful and tightly written piece. V+ all the way dear sir.

      AWESOME!

      Kim

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      I appreciate the compliment, Harish.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      So good to see you, Kim. Thank you very much my dear.

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