She Is Cold
She Is Cold
by Laura Summerville Reed
Everything about her is cold
Top to bottom
From the crown of her head
to the tips of her toes
Fingers and lips and knees and elbows
To the end of her adorable, freckled nose
All about her is cold
Frozen
Icy
And cold
Save only her beating heart
That's so warm
....And black as coal
But it burns
Oh baby, it burns
©LSR 2013
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Wayne is a graduate of the University of Southern Mississippi. He served over six years as an officer in the United States Air Force working as a...
Comments
AUTHORThanks, manatita44. Sorry for the protracted response time. I'm glad you liked it.
Yes, it burns. So good to know. A fiery furnace of burning Love, this Heart. Great Poem!
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I'm glad you like it!
Wooo-Hoooo! I like it. The songs so well with your verse. Of course, this song goes with about anything! LOL! ~WB
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Consider it done, take a look above, Wayne Brown! and thank you, thank you! ~ Laura
I loved this one...the freckled nose and the burning heart. I really think you should have linked the Rolling Stones' "She's So Cold" to this one...I would come back just to see the two together! ~WB
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Thank you, my dear Augustine. You know how I value your opinion and so appreciate your comments. Always and only encouragement. You support my vices with the most charming ease. ~ Laura
I can feel the frost emanating from this freckled beauty. I see the cold fog falling away from her, and yet and I cannot turn away. Is it the freckled nose that draws me in? Yes, but it's also the allure of the black heart burning within this ice queen. Can anyone die from frostbite? I'm hankering to find out....
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