She Wept On Mother's Day~
Other related hubs by CrisSp:
- To The Girl Who Made Her Cry~
Who would understand the challenges of a mother and the choices that her daughter (or son) makes? This poem quite expressed in free verse is an expression of a mother's loving sentiments and of her tender heart's longing for some answers... - Love: A Mother-Daughter Legacy
A mother and daughter relationship may be complex at times yet a special one. Here's a legacy from my mom that I am now passing on to my own daughters. Don't miss the video at the bottom of the hub.
More from the author~
- To The Girl Who Made Her Cry~
Who would understand the challenges of a mother and the choices that her daughter (or son) makes? This poem quite expressed in free verse is an expression of a mother's loving sentiments and of her tender heart's longing... - Wounds of the Past, Heal now I say!
This hub is meant to enlighten and remind us to let go....let go of that excruciating pain, let go of those who have hurt us or whatever hurt us. It's time to bury their thoughts and live, breathe just breathe...
She wept on Mother’s Day
I know why but cannot tell
Not embarrass just no courage
To reveal what’s in her heart.
I said time heals all wound
She said no, it’s a lie
I said pray and don’t fret
She said, I pray but I’m afraid.
Staring blank on the wall
I can sense she’s hurting
'Though I can never tell
The depth of her pain.
Softly she whispered
To defend her heart
Said, she’s lived long enough
With unbearable pain.
With morbid thoughts
That she disclosed
I fear that she might lose it
Give in to those evil impressions.
Cut her soul out
From the battle and struggle
It’s rough, it’s tough
To shelve those wicked thoughts.
She said the journey
Is heavy and bumpy
All the good overturned
So, is it worth all the trying.
Along the road of solitude
She tried to reach out
But in vain, no one can hear
Her voice of despair.
She tried to muster
The courage to tell
But people strayed away
And truth not portrayed.
With tears in her eyes
She gently whispered
I miss my damsel everyday
And, I love her all my life.
Copyright@CrisSp~TM/06-2013. "The heart of my soul speaks to the soul of my heart by writing." ~
© 2013 CrisSp
Comments
AUTHORThanks Kim! Blessings back at'cha!
As a mom, this poem really touched me. I can't imagine the kind of pain one would endure having lost a child. This is such a powerful write, and yet tenderly presented.
Blessings,
Kim
- AUTHOR
James: Thank you.
This poem is...wow. There is SOOO much emotion it makes you feel over whelmed, you know? Well good poem. Thank you!
- AUTHOR
Tuatha: No, thank you for gracing this page. Appreciate your kind comment.
Love from the sky~
A valid yet painful reminder of those things we hold so tightly, that healing cannot come forward. Sad yes, but in many ways a good thing to know we are not alone in the pain we feel. Thank You CrisSp.
- AUTHOR
dreamseeker2: Thank you.
Sad, but great expression through your poem of an aching heart and longing. Interesting piece. Voted it up! : )
- AUTHOR
Theater girl: Thank you.
Really lovely, sad.....but beautiful. Loss is something we must live with...but you expressed it so well!
- AUTHOR
Hello Wayne! Thank you. Sad indeed and such is part of life.
Very good work and it really hit home. Yes...there were a lot of tears this Mothers Day.
- AUTHOR
aviannovice: Sad indeed but we should still be grateful for the memories...whatever is left behind. Thank you for gracing my day. Keep well and always look up. *smile*
I feel that heavy loss myself, even after all those years, but what is toughest is for the mother's that lose their children. You said it so well, there will always be that little piece within us that remembers.
- AUTHOR
Dear jon, thank you for your readership and for your valuable feedback. It is greatly appreciated and I'm glad that the message is getting accrossed.
- AUTHOR
Rasma: Somehow, it feels good to simply express ourselves no matter how sad it is and then there are beautiful people like you who appreciates it. Thank you.
Here's sending you some love from the sky.
- AUTHOR
Isaac: First off, no worries at all. We all have a life outside HP and I know it's tough to catch up. But, thank you for your time. I sincerely appreciate it and happy to see you here. Take care.
- AUTHOR
Ausseye: Pleased to meet you and yes, crisp as in nature only with a double "s" and capital. :) Thank you for your readership. I didn't realize this much I could reach through this hub and I'm glad. Have a good day mate!
- AUTHOR
Hello Nell! It is indeed sad but I have to express it somehow and thank you for receiving it well. I appreciate the comments. Love from the sky~
- AUTHOR
Valleypoet: Thank you.
- AUTHOR
Hello Janet! Thank you for reading and for sharing your own experience. It's good to know that you could somehow relate. It is a sad tale, indeed. However, I hope things get better eventually and I wish you all the best with your relationship with her (your mom). Love and light~
- AUTHOR
Thank you Martin. Glad to see you back. Keep well.
As I read your words and am overcome with sorrow, I can't help but think of all the people who take their mothers, or guardians, for granted. This sentiment that you have written not only describes the respect and love you have for your own mother, but demands respect and love for all mothers.
Though sad this is touching and beautiful.
Sad poem CrisSp,
But, it was really good. Nice job. I always like to read your works. Sorry it's been so long since my last visit.
I. White
Hi Crissp is that crisp in nature:
Loved the poem as it dragged me into a little moment:
The poem was a beautiful and oh, so painful as you (reader) willed her(mother) to rally and become an equal with her past.
I felt my heart pump pain
Flow deep and wide
As my body absorbed
Life
But then I saw my other
And my mind swept past the here and now
A gave my soul a boost
Eager to grab the infinite of love
A sad poem, but oh so true in many families. Whether its the daughter or son who no longer talk to the mother, or the other way round, so sad and yet it can be sorted out so easily, wonderful!
A very sad poem, but beautifully written:-))
Your words make me feel very sad. It reminds me of my bad relationship between my mother and me. It has even become worse these days. She has never been satisfied with what I am and what I do. But she had also a bad relationship with her mother. I have always tried to find a solution by talking to my mom about how we can treat and accept each other. Finally, she doesn't want to get in contact with me anymore. I love her and I know she loves me but our relationship is too complicated.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem which made me so thoughtful.
Very artful, how you dealt out our feelings. My hat off to you and your talent.
- AUTHOR
whonunuwho: Thank you for gracing my sentimental hub. It is highly appreciated.
- AUTHOR
midget38: Thank you. I sincerely appreciate your support Michelle.
- AUTHOR
truthfornow: Thank you for reading.
A sadness that only mothers may know. Our children mean so much to us all. Thank you for sharing this poignant work and it is well received. whonu
A mother hurts in those sad times. Wonderful write, Cristina, sad and poignant.
Sad but beautiful. Get job in capture the emotion.
- AUTHOR
Thank you Bill. Blessings back at you...love from the sky.
Sadly beautiful, Cris! There was a palpable pain while reading this....lovely work.
blessings always,
bill
38