Shoreline secrets
Walking on the shoreline
The sand between our toes
Playing just like children
Splashing each others clothes
Trying not to feel it
Skipping more than just waves
Both yearning one and other
Whilst trying to behave
But our laughs still feel hollow
I see more in your eyes
Coy chuckles are not hiding
The love we have inside
Let the sea crash upon us
And wash away our fear
I hold you safe forever
Or drown in my own tears
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The ocean is a magical place, is it not Jon? I love the image you words put in my mind. I love the sea. It offers a sense of freedom and wanderlust. Or lust. I've experienced both!
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Me too Shauna ;) !! LOL did not even know her name hahahaha, well that was a long time ago :)))
But yes the sea is VERY important in my life which made this fun to write :)
Love Simba xxx
I'm a sucker for a LOVE story. Beautiful and touching poem.....being by the water brings out the best of our emotions....UP+++
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Hey Fpherj48 ,
I could not agree with you more :)
Thanks for your comment
Love
Simba xxx
perfect imagery for a timeless moment! up and awesome!
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Thanks Btrbell :))))))
Love Simba xxx
I see you're gaining followers, Jon. Yay!!!!!!
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Alrite Shauna :) yeah getting a few now :)
I am loving the hubs at the moment !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love Simba xxx
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Alrite Shauna :) yeah getting a few now :)
I am loving the hubs at the moment !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love Simba xxx
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Alrite Shauna :) yeah getting a few now :)
I am loving the hubs at the moment !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love Simba xxx
Ohhh! This is so sweet. You make it easy to imagine being one of the lovers. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.
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Cyndi10,
Thank you so much :))))
Love Simba xxx
Voted up and beautiful. A wonderful poem about love by the seaside. Nice imagery of crashing waves and shimmering sea. Loved this.
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Hey GRL,
Thanks for dropping in love your comment as always :)
Love Simba xxx
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Hey GRL,
Thanks for dropping in love your comment as always :)
Love Simba xxx
This is sad but lovely for the times spent together and still cherished in your heart. Great memories like this should never be forgotten and Jon, you are someone full of goodness though I've only known you here.
Keep your love flying towards her...perhaps and wishes that one day she'll catch it.
You might know how far messages like this would go. If you let it go freely without limitations, the whole world will see it; it may take time for your messages to get to her, but I do believe that one day, it will be delivered to her.
This is a very beautiful poem and I love the title as well. Take care of your heart, dear Simba! Let your mighty ROAR reach her.
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Thanks Tess,
You comments really touch me as much as writing to pieces ,I have said it elsewhere but your unbelievable support has feed my soul with inner strength and I am so happy that our paths have crossed at this point in my life :)
Love Simba xxx
Very lovely poem! bravo! :)
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Thanks Hattie :)
Simba
Beautiful words, brings back memories, times, situations.
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Thank you so much for your comment Betty
Simba :)
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