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Shoreline secrets

Updated on October 15, 2012

Walking on the shoreline

The sand between our toes

Playing just like children

Splashing each others clothes


Trying not to feel it

Skipping more than just waves

Both yearning one and other

Whilst trying to behave


But our laughs still feel hollow

I see more in your eyes

Coy chuckles are not hiding

The love we have inside


Let the sea crash upon us

And wash away our fear

I hold you safe forever

Or drown in my own tears

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thank you so much for your comment Betty

      Simba :)

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      Betty (Alawine) Overstreet 5 years ago from Vacaville, Ca.

      Beautiful words, brings back memories, times, situations.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks Hattie :)

      Simba

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      HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Very lovely poem! bravo! :)

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks Tess,

      You comments really touch me as much as writing to pieces ,I have said it elsewhere but your unbelievable support has feed my soul with inner strength and I am so happy that our paths have crossed at this point in my life :)

      Love Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      This is sad but lovely for the times spent together and still cherished in your heart. Great memories like this should never be forgotten and Jon, you are someone full of goodness though I've only known you here.

      Keep your love flying towards her...perhaps and wishes that one day she'll catch it.

      You might know how far messages like this would go. If you let it go freely without limitations, the whole world will see it; it may take time for your messages to get to her, but I do believe that one day, it will be delivered to her.

      This is a very beautiful poem and I love the title as well. Take care of your heart, dear Simba! Let your mighty ROAR reach her.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Hey GRL,

      Thanks for dropping in love your comment as always :)

      Love Simba xxx

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Hey GRL,

      Thanks for dropping in love your comment as always :)

      Love Simba xxx

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. A wonderful poem about love by the seaside. Nice imagery of crashing waves and shimmering sea. Loved this.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Cyndi10,

      Thank you so much :))))

      Love Simba xxx

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      Cynthia B Turner 5 years ago from Georgia

      Ohhh! This is so sweet. You make it easy to imagine being one of the lovers. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Alrite Shauna :) yeah getting a few now :)

      I am loving the hubs at the moment !!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Love Simba xxx

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Alrite Shauna :) yeah getting a few now :)

      I am loving the hubs at the moment !!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Love Simba xxx

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Alrite Shauna :) yeah getting a few now :)

      I am loving the hubs at the moment !!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Love Simba xxx

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      I see you're gaining followers, Jon. Yay!!!!!!

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks Btrbell :))))))

      Love Simba xxx

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      perfect imagery for a timeless moment! up and awesome!

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Hey Fpherj48 ,

      I could not agree with you more :)

      Thanks for your comment

      Love

      Simba xxx

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      Paula 5 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      I'm a sucker for a LOVE story. Beautiful and touching poem.....being by the water brings out the best of our emotions....UP+++

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Me too Shauna ;) !! LOL did not even know her name hahahaha, well that was a long time ago :)))

      But yes the sea is VERY important in my life which made this fun to write :)

      Love Simba xxx

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      The ocean is a magical place, is it not Jon? I love the image you words put in my mind. I love the sea. It offers a sense of freedom and wanderlust. Or lust. I've experienced both!

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