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Six Words
Impossible is the word
That's going round my mind
Tip toeing around feelings
We expected not to find
We pull each other closer
Then shy..... we back away
Frightened of offending
With what we want to say
I'm sure that we both know
What's in each others hearts
We know all of the dangers
And that we shouldn't start
The bond growing too strong
Our souls now too entwined
To deny you the emotions
I prayed I wouldn't find
You felt them pure as sunshine
So asked if they were true
In fear of my solace
And what I next would do
For you knew that in your own soul
You kept your love repressed
Whilst waiting for my answer
Your heart pounding in your chest
Then six words cut you like a knife
Yes I'm in love with you
Now the knife was in your hands
Your feet were in my shoes
To stay the girl he gave his heart
His shall be broken too
So told him you felt not the same
Although it was not true
This story never ends well
When three hearts are in dispute
As dreams of Adam and Eve
Must contain forbidden fruit
Comments
Im always in the "neighborhood" :)
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Thanks Linda good to see you dropping by :)
Simba xxx
Someones digging deeper...lol...Good writ my friend !! :)
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Wow I am feeling kinda honoured !! this is the 4th or 5th reply to you tis morning I am so happy you are reading my work hahaha !!!! I really love it !!!
OK ummm.........yes me too I could do with some real love, i praying too lol
Simba xxx
Sharing this one too, Simba! It's beautiful. Hope your wishes and dreams will take your side and not abandon you, I pray.
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Did I !!!!! wow.................. um............. feel a bit ...shy hahaha :)
Thank Linda :) x
Simba
See you made the HOT list with this one.. NICE :)
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Thank you Aisha and thanks for dropping in as well :)
Simba
nicely written and touching poem... voted up
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Gunna email in a minute
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I knoooooow what you meant LOL just glad you never said mother son ;) xxxx
Oops! I meant father and daughter!
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Yep Shauna point taken, thanks too I will email you very soon give you an upshot of the events. Thank you so much too xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Jon, take care of your custody battle first. My second husband was supposed to be a step father to my son. His young son could do no wrong and mine could do no right in his eyes. Guess who won the battle? Mother and son (hopefully in your case, father and son). Outsiders talk a big game, but trust you me, when it comes to blood you need to be the only one. When you became a parent Savannah's needs came first. You won't get your time for a long time to come my friend. You have my email address. Let's talk. Don't get yourself hurt and lose the momentum you've gained in bringing your precious, innocent daughter home.
My six words to you: Make Savannah's life your priority now!
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I will keep them coming ;)
Simba
Great words here and I now look forward to so many more by you.
Eddy.
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