Serpents Kiss
Command me, hypnotize
slitted eyes
no more, my will
is this life
I feel?
shallow breath
Curl your fingers
and I’ll obey
your come hither
red nails
on white fingers
green eyed window
to your black soul
slither
Invisible scales
wrap around
squeeze forth
my passion
becoming your puppet
putty in your hands
in your mouth
between your legs
as you drain me
taking my will
breath, catching
twitching
killing me slowly
my soul
and I try
to cry
on your marble shoulder
but you fucked me
and flung me
like dirty laundry
and ignored my groan
wrinkled and worn
until in your
lusty sloth
you desired to
don me again
tho musky and used
pulled upon you again
to fill your void
a snake
inside a serpent
to uncoil you
and unloosen
your forked tongue
wailing
in an orgasmic hisssss
Comments
what raw emotions here my friend.. I love the steamy flow and the eeriness to voted awesome!
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Thank you very much Frank.
Wow, Wayne... my jaw still hurts as I pick it up from the floor... lol. I can't help it, this is a killer write, but I wouldn't be me without the joke. I have to admit, I really don't know how good you are because, I AM bias; but... I'm pretty sure it's safe to say YOU'RE AWESOME! This was a really heated and passionate read... I loved it, period... in fact, I'll be back to read it again :D
This was about a snake, right? lol
Okay... I've pushed every button on this page and I'm sharing this puppy now too!
Your biggest fan... yes, I am! :D
Cat
I love these kinds of poems. Sensual and passionate. I love it! Voted it up!
Voted up and awesome. SSSSSSSerpents kissed I can do without. Enjoyed your creative poetry though. Passing this on.
ohhhhhhh!!!! this poem gave me the tingling feeling ;)
NICEEEE :)
Thissssssss isssssssssssss awesssssssssssssssome.
Best Always and Sizzling,
Kim
Wow So beautiful,sensual and well penned.Voted up
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Thank you, writinglover. I'm glad you could appreciate this one.
Echoes of Eden, Wayne,- when 'I was the only girl in the world and you were the only boy', as the song goes; - but then, that horrid old serpent had to spoil things! :-)
Gets votes. . . of course. Merits them! U-A-I!
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Thank you so much for enduring the serpent, Rasma. ( :
Wow, Wayne. This is orgasmic bliss. I'm out of breath just reading it. You certaintly painted a vivid picture in my mind with this one.
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Anumaha; I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for the visit.
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Hi Kim. Thanks for for stopping by and hissing me a comment. : )
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Thank you Nellieanna. Your kind words and support mean a great deal to me.
Wow! That was rather 'biting' read. Very raw and passionate.
That was an incredibly erotic poem. It rivals the sexy picture!
Have a good weekend.
~ Kathryn
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Thank you Sha.
Vivid and enigmatic. Great write.
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Shanmarie, thank for stopping by, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
"a snake
inside a serpent"
Uh, yea. I love that line. I like how every line is cut short. Heightens the intensity of the poem for me. Thank you for sharing this.
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Vellur, thank you very much.
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Violetta, thank you for the visit and for the support!
Pretty darn graphic that sure gets the point across. Bravo!
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Thank you, Feb.
I was thinking about you last night when the cicadas started singing.
trussssssssssssst in me hissed the serpent. I singe my wings drawn to the flames of this red hot number Yowwwzaaa!
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Thank you writingalaska. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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