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Serpents Kiss

Updated on July 19, 2013
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Command me, hypnotize

slitted eyes

no more, my will

is this life

I feel?

shallow breath

Curl your fingers

and I’ll obey

your come hither

red nails

on white fingers

green eyed window

to your black soul

slither

Invisible scales

wrap around

squeeze forth

my passion

becoming your puppet

putty in your hands

in your mouth

between your legs

as you drain me

taking my will

breath, catching

twitching

killing me slowly

my soul

and I try

to cry

on your marble shoulder

but you fucked me

and flung me

like dirty laundry

and ignored my groan

wrinkled and worn

until in your

lusty sloth

you desired to

don me again

tho musky and used

pulled upon you again

to fill your void

a snake

inside a serpent

to uncoil you

and unloosen

your forked tongue

wailing

in an orgasmic hisssss



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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you writingalaska. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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      writinginalaska 4 years ago from southeast Alaska

      trussssssssssssst in me hissed the serpent. I singe my wings drawn to the flames of this red hot number Yowwwzaaa!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Feb.

      I was thinking about you last night when the cicadas started singing.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Pretty darn graphic that sure gets the point across. Bravo!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Violetta, thank you for the visit and for the support!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Vellur, thank you very much.

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      Violetta Alexis 4 years ago from Portsmouth, VA

      "a snake

      inside a serpent"

      Uh, yea. I love that line. I like how every line is cut short. Heightens the intensity of the poem for me. Thank you for sharing this.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Shanmarie, thank for stopping by, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Vivid and enigmatic. Great write.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Sha.

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      Kathryn 4 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

      That was an incredibly erotic poem. It rivals the sexy picture!

      Have a good weekend.

      ~ Kathryn

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Wow! That was rather 'biting' read. Very raw and passionate.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Nellieanna. Your kind words and support mean a great deal to me.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Hi Kim. Thanks for for stopping by and hissing me a comment. : )

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Anumaha; I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for the visit.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Wow, Wayne. This is orgasmic bliss. I'm out of breath just reading it. You certaintly painted a vivid picture in my mind with this one.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you so much for enduring the serpent, Rasma. ( :

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      Nellieanna Hay 4 years ago from TEXAS

      Echoes of Eden, Wayne,- when 'I was the only girl in the world and you were the only boy', as the song goes; - but then, that horrid old serpent had to spoil things! :-)

      Gets votes. . . of course. Merits them! U-A-I!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, writinglover. I'm glad you could appreciate this one.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Wow So beautiful,sensual and well penned.Voted up

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Thissssssss isssssssssssss awesssssssssssssssome.

      Best Always and Sizzling,

      Kim

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      Anupama 4 years ago from Nepal

      ohhhhhhh!!!! this poem gave me the tingling feeling ;)

      NICEEEE :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. SSSSSSSerpents kissed I can do without. Enjoyed your creative poetry though. Passing this on.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      I love these kinds of poems. Sensual and passionate. I love it! Voted it up!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Wow, Wayne... my jaw still hurts as I pick it up from the floor... lol. I can't help it, this is a killer write, but I wouldn't be me without the joke. I have to admit, I really don't know how good you are because, I AM bias; but... I'm pretty sure it's safe to say YOU'RE AWESOME! This was a really heated and passionate read... I loved it, period... in fact, I'll be back to read it again :D

      This was about a snake, right? lol

      Okay... I've pushed every button on this page and I'm sharing this puppy now too!

      Your biggest fan... yes, I am! :D

      Cat

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you very much Frank.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      what raw emotions here my friend.. I love the steamy flow and the eeriness to voted awesome!