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Slow Funeral March

Updated on February 2, 2015

Heaps of fluffy wool

Floating smoothly here and there,

And grass so verdant

Down the hill still vibrating

Since our slow funeral march.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      very well written my friend

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      Smilealot 2 years ago

      Nicely done:-))

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Powerful and well written. This tanka seems to talk of the beauty of life even through death. Thank you. Jamie

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      Thelma Alberts 2 years ago from Germany

      Beautiful! Well done!

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Beautifully written, dear Tijani. I am so sorry about your dad.

      Hugs, peace and prayers to comfort you, My White Crown.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Beautiful writing! It has been a while since I have visited--my apologies and my loss

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      Tijani Achamlal 22 months ago from Morocco

      Frank,

      Thanks so much for being there all the time

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      Tijani Achamlal 20 months ago from Morocco

      Smilealot,

      Thanks for stopping by .

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