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Something In The Wind (tanka)

Updated on January 30, 2015

Something in the wind

Brushing across the flowers

How timeless a scene

Now rushing to this moment

The memory of a kiss


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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Tender, soft memories of love's faded kiss.

      Beautiful, as always, Martin.

      DJ.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      This is beautiful and gentle, Martin. I can just imagine the breeze of a kiss brushing the petals of the flowers.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely, sensitive poem. You write beautiful poetry with great imagery.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99....Spring is in the air..as is Love...beautiful tanka....

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      The wind blew your wonderful words to me. Enjoyed.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So much said in so few words. Have a wonderful day Martin and keep them coming..

      Eddy.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful Martin...

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And long may it last!

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