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Spark's Birth and Fire's End

Updated on January 15, 2012

Getting

out of her car

she stepped outside

and smiled,

his every wall fell

every hope rose

she was like

a thornless rose

an innocent embrace

nervous jitters

searching for a way

to break the ice

as they were meeting

for the first time



~~~



Driving

down the road

feeling beside himself

with his passenger

sitting beside him

conversation ensued

sparks were flying

smiles widening

eyes sparkling

forcing himself

to watch the road

for his gaze

was drawn

magnetically

to the brilliance

the radiance

of her eyes

her face


~~~


Sitting

across from her

at a dimly lit table

trying to play it cool

but simply unable

trying to pretend

he wasn’t already

lost in her

wanting her

craving her

body and mind


~~~



Grazing

lips created

a scene

from a dream

and everything

fell into place

romance’s currents

flowed throughout

their hearts beat

in elevated unison

like never before

in either’s lifetime



~~~


Playing

in the living room

transitioned to

pleasures

in the bedroom

they melted together

like scented candles

in desire’s fire

his back, a canvas

her nails brushing

welcoming wounds

the artistry

of ecstasy

released in full

consuming the sheets

igniting the room

love’s first spark

born all too soon


~~~


Laying

Breathless

In stillness

Fingers

Gliding

Over skin

So Sensitive

Gazing

In loving

Timeless

Moments

Long gone

Passing

Memories


Of spark’s birth

And fire’s end


~~~


© copyright BenD.A 2011



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    • BenWritings profile image
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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      saddle - I do feel like I am getting more of a feel for it every day. It seems to come more naturally than ever. The comments and views I am getting are just too wonderful.

      Thank you

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      Such magnitude erotica in a sense, I felt I've been there done that. I felt waves of romance sweep through the air and land on my soul. Oh remembering those youthful days I played the game and the flames were passion and romance with the scent of a woman by my side. Thank you Ben for some memories.

      This is one of your best, you are moving along at a steady pace with rich text and verse. Bravo

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      always exploring - I captured it because I was telling my own story, which helps haha. Thank you very much

      Mark - I really loved that part as well. I agree, this one really sucked me in, and I have enjoyed the response to it. Likewise, I am honored to be compared to you, because you write with POWER. Thanks a lot for checking this out man

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      The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      "his back, a canvas

      her nails brushing

      welcoming wounds

      the artistry

      of ecstasy"

      I particularly like this part... sweet pain... the blood of love and lust...

      As for the poem itself it is a story and I just think this style keeps the reader engrossed as each line hits with the right impact and it's brevity leaves the reader wanting more... so they read and read and soon they have become you... the protagonist...

      I'm honored by any comparison to a gifted writer... you have your whole life ahead of you and I'm sure we will see much art coming from your open heart.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Aha, Young love, So sweet. You captured it completely.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      thanks Lizzybeth. haha

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      Elizabeth99 6 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

      Nice, cute and sexy at the same time. :)

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      thanks a lot arb :] haha

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      arb 6 years ago from oregon

      Sparks birth and fires end. You have weaved an intricate and playful unfolding to lay between the covers. Very well done Ben. Voted--- you know the rest!

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      I am rather saucy, bella.

      it's what I do? haha ;]

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      HA! What can I say this is quite a piece you got here Sir!! Thats what happens when you got saucy work leaking onto paper.... Im jus saying ya know!!!

      >_<

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      hahaha, Belly Bell Bel...

      Thank you ma'am, that was very kind

      don't sit still while reading my work, EVER lol jk

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      F'en Bad Ass Beny Ben Ben!! You had me going on this one. Couldn't stay still >_<

      bella

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      acer - yes, and it didn't take long

      doug - thanks a lot man, yeah I love experimenting. So many different styles have such different impacts

      nikki - thanks, I like your nasty disneyland poems too :]

      Ian - thank you for your constant support

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      Twilight Lawns 6 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      The development of the theme is masterly, Ben. The culmination always depends on the groundwork, and you did this more than adequately.

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      this was really good.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      You've been experimenting with a very sparse style and I like it -- makes each word so valuable.

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      The moment infatuation evolves into something more.;)

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      thanks mystery girl (kristie)

      randy - back atcha? lol

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Rawrrrrr

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      nameless 6 years ago

      this poem is very sweet and then seductive.. :) it flows lovly together..

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      thanks for that, nighthag. thats great to hear :]

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      this is one of my favorite of yours, this flowed so beautiful while creating a visual and emotional scene that played out perfectly in my mind. so very very good

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      mckbirdbks 6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      My comment regarding Suburban Poet IS a compliment. He has an ebb and flow to his work that waltzes to it’s conclusion. Honestly, you are much deeper than I, so sometimes, like a submarine drawn to deep, I implode before reaching the bottom. That has more to do with me than your writing. You are talented, and have a future guiding your readers to new levels.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      oh wow...haha

      Cheyenne, perfection is an overstatement, but I am practically blushing...thanks so much, and I'm so glad you liked my dedication poem as well. :]

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      Cheyenne Barroga 6 years ago from Salt lake city, UT

      this is absolute perfection. the sweetness of the man's insecurities and the passion that ensued has left me speechless. so i must say this: write more for us, artiste!

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      SeenButNotHeard 6 years ago from Michigan

      Yes, one of your best, most definitely. It's my new favorite :)

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      wow thanks willstarr! I wasn't expecting these amazing reactions to this one.

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Excellent!

      One of your best.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Ellie - WOW, that's such a great comment :D thanks a bunch! I really wanted to convey the process of love and passion, beginning with the first date, until the first time in the bedroom. This was written with a strong memory of both...

      Thanks for the flattery :]

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      SeenButNotHeard 6 years ago from Michigan

      Oh my gawd! I love this one. Tis spicy, yet sweet. The words, the rhymes, the story of it. This is truly amazing, Mr. Writings. Outstanding and fantastical. (I'm having fun throwing adjectives at you now, they're all true though, so enjoy) xD

      *Goes back to read it an eighth time*

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      mckbird, thank you. Just curious, why do you compare it to his writing? I take that as a compliment, but just wondering what you mean. :]

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      mckbirdbks 6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      I think you have given Suburban Poet a run for his money with this one BenWritings.

      You miss these moments when they are gone.

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