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Speak to Me of Life

Updated on August 14, 2015
Speak to Me of Life,  a poem written in the lines of faces
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Stories are etched into lines.

each version of truth

finding its audience

in the alleys we travel in the dark.

Each line, a glory walk

on red plush.


I am drawn to those lines,

sorting my truths into tiny piles

setting fire to them, shedding light

on your eyes,

which speak to me of life.



copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2015




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      Audrey Howitt 9 months ago from California

      Thank you vink!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you Missy!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you Ed!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you Ruby!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you KrakyePoku!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you John!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you Rachel!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you Genna!

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Thank you Frank!

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      I am not sure that I do either Mike!

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Thank you Vellur!

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Thank you Kevin!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you juneaukid!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you Kim!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you Linda!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you Theresa--I like it when poems go to unexpected places--

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Hi Jamie! Thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you GmaGoldie!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you Flourish!

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      Vink 19 months ago from India

      Beautiful composition Audrey and very deep.

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      Rachel L Alba 22 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      Hi Audrey, You have a way of bringing out things that I think of but can't express. You have a God given talent. Keep it up.

      Blessings to you.

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      Kelly Kline Burnett 22 months ago from Madison, Wisconsin

      AudreyHowitt,

      I love your poetry! Thank you so much!

      I know as a writer you are penalized for the brevity but there is such beauty in your words.

      Please keep up the great work!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Chitrangada!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you MsDora!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Rachel!

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      Missy Smith 2 years ago from Florida

      Sometimes I wonder if I'm too noticeable when I look at people. I love to do that, I always imagine what their lives are like. I will look at a mother playing with her kid, and think; she seems a lot like me. I love to look and listen to older people the most I think. They are usually full of wisdom, some always so happy and cheerful, and it makes me pleased, because I know they have come to that place in life where they are just free to be. I see some who seem lonely, and, of course, this makes me super sad. I always examine their faces and wonder what they looked like in their younger years, and I also wonder what it was like to live in a different era. People are fascinating and all unique in their own way. This is a very beautiful poem, Audrey! :)

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      The lines share years of emotion in a glance. Beautiful poem.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 2 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Beautiful and very expressive poem!

      Thank you!

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      Dora Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      Full of experience and truth. Beautiful, classical, meaningful!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you whonu!

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      Deb Hirt 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Amazingly, when each of us reads something, we inject our own version of what it means to us. Clearly, it is the freedom of the mind of each individual. A wonderful piece, as always.

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      Anemix 2 years ago

      life is etched between lines!, loved it, powerful! :)

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      Rachel L Alba 2 years ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      Life does have a way of creating those lines in our faces. You are very thoughtful, you could tell in your poems.

      Blessings to you.

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      CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      There's hidden truth between the lines and this piece is well crafted and thought provoking.

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      ahorseback 2 years ago

      There is so much written in these lines , more than we can ever read in fact , Each one of us has these lines too . Oh- how I seek out the wisdom lines ! Your writing is absolutely awesome !

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      Patricia Scott 2 years ago from sunny Florida

      '....the alleys we travel in the dark'...for me those alleys have opened up new understanding and enlightened me....

      succinct powerful and spot on. Audrey.

      Hoping all is well with you today

      Angels are headed your way ps

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      Nithya Venkat 2 years ago from Dubai

      Beautiful! Each line will speak of lives experiences.

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      mckbirdbks 2 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      This must be great. I have never understood great poetry.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      even after a few years you still impressive me with your work Audrey.. thank you :)

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      Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I agree with drbj, who expressed it so well. Your words are windows into the soul :-)

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      ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

      beautiful and the picture is perfect

      a definite vote up

      Blessings,

      Kim

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      drbj and sherry 2 years ago from south Florida

      What a fascinating story one could read in the lines on the face of that photo you included. Freud believed that the eyes are the window to the soul. I think he would agree that the lines in the face tell you quite a bit, too.

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      Theresa Ast 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Lovely, Audrey. Didn't go where I expected....although I am not exactly sure what I was expecting. :) Theresa

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      Linda Crampton 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is a very interesting and thought provoking poem, as always, Audrey.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      People's faces are amazing Annart! Thank you for your kind words

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Oh the dreaded lines! Are they a window into the soul? Beautiful Audrey.

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      Krakye Omane Poku 2 years ago from Ghana

      This is superb and nicely done

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      A truly awesome poem, Audrey. So profound; so captivating ; so meaningful and so real. So full of wisdom; so invigorating; So applicable to many lives ...

      Thank you. I trust that you remain well and continue to write such as only you can. Om Shanti!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      What a great poem Audrey...those lines certainly do hide a million tales and life experiences.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Well written Audrey. Always a joy to read.

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Superb poem, dear Audrey! Yes, we can see so much life in really looking at another one' face, especially for me are the eyes.

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      Richard Francis Fleck 2 years ago from Denver, Colorado

      I enjoyed reading your very effective poem.

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      Kevin Goodwin 2 years ago

      Very nice its amazing what you can learn from a person's face.

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      Nkosiinathi Ncala 2 years ago from Midrand Johannesburg South Africa

      nice.

      but so very short....

      more more more....

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      whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States

      A beauty lies within the eyes, in every face, a grace. Nicely done my friend. whonu

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      Ann Carr 2 years ago from SW England

      Amazing what people's faces can tell us; lives lived, emotions, all sorts...

      You've encapsulated all that so well, as always.

      Ann

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one teaches--I think that was what I was trying to get to--the stories in people's faces

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      Dianna Mendez 2 years ago

      Very expressive. I can't help but think of how every line in a person's face tells a story. As they say, the eyes are the windows of the soul.