Star Surrounded by Moons
I am the beginning of an endless reflection of myself.
I reveal the moons only to be recognized by them.
Without them I do not exist, I can only wait to be discovered.
I can only be seen if I see myself within them.
I will only be able to live if the moons see me reveal them.
Without me.
Without them.
Nothing.
Comments
Just beautiful!
HandGun *GunFireRed*
Simple yet so beautiful. I love it! Voted+ and all.
Voted up and awesome. Short but powerful. Love that pic. Passing this on.
I like the way it portrays the importance of coexistence.
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I can only be seen if I see myself within them.
I will only be able to live if the moons see me reveal them.
Without me.
Without them.
Nothing.
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Voted up and beautiful!
Though it is a very short poem but definitely reflected a great point of view.
Like your poetry
Well written and beautiful, I love the contrast between your rythmic long line with your sharp short perfect end. Jamie
Great short poem, perhaps I should publish some of my shorter poems. I always feel like they aren't finished or something because there is so little to them, but I suppose they are what they are.
beautiful. I assume it is your original. Just a little suggestion....very little. Edit the first line to be "an endless" rather than "a endless". I look forward to more.
Chris
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