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Star Surrounded by Moons

Updated on May 31, 2012


I am the beginning of an endless reflection of myself.

I reveal the moons only to be recognized by them.

Without them I do not exist, I can only wait to be discovered.

I can only be seen if I see myself within them.

I will only be able to live if the moons see me reveal them.

Without me.

Without them.

Nothing.

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      HandGun 

      6 years ago from Here Taking Over

      Just beautiful!

      HandGun *GunFireRed*

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      Not Found 

      6 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Simple yet so beautiful. I love it! Voted+ and all.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Short but powerful. Love that pic. Passing this on.

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      QudsiaP1 

      6 years ago

      I like the way it portrays the importance of coexistence.

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      I can only be seen if I see myself within them.

      I will only be able to live if the moons see me reveal them.

      Without me.

      Without them.

      Nothing.

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      Shampa Sadhya 

      6 years ago from NEW DELHI, INDIA

      Voted up and beautiful!

      Though it is a very short poem but definitely reflected a great point of view.

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      magic69 

      6 years ago

      Like your poetry

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 

      6 years ago from Reno NV

      Well written and beautiful, I love the contrast between your rythmic long line with your sharp short perfect end. Jamie

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      dmop 

      6 years ago from Cambridge City, IN

      Great short poem, perhaps I should publish some of my shorter poems. I always feel like they aren't finished or something because there is so little to them, but I suppose they are what they are.

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      cam8510 

      6 years ago

      beautiful. I assume it is your original. Just a little suggestion....very little. Edit the first line to be "an endless" rather than "a endless". I look forward to more.

      Chris

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