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Stepping Stones
Each step has a promise
Each stone another inch
Taking me farther and farther
To where I am meant to be
Some are small and easy
Some I can't leap through
Each one is a lesson
To survive through
There are many who cross
Who can be a barrier
They can try and hold me back
Blinding me endlessly
Fighting and keeping on
Is the only way to be free
Through the pit of fire
That has shown itself to me
There are many twists and turns
That I can't see at first
They always take me on a new adventure
To where I am meant to be
In the end we will all be set free
Wild birds that have been caged
For years dying to forever be
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Thank you Debbie!
wow every stone is a another step to a lesson.. great poem .. I love it and so in dept.
You are a wonderful poet.
Debbie
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That's good. I'm great, just been busy. :)
C21,
i am doing ok I guess, I never know how to answer that question... Ha but thanks for askin.. how are You, I feel a disturbance in the force with you...???
is everything ok?
TH
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@ Hi Tom how are you? LOL. I don't know why. What does that even mean?
@ Reiki thank you for reading and sharing!
Life turned into a poem. Nice job Caroline.
c21,
Ive been called amusing and a moose but never amoosing...
wonder why?
TH
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Hi Stessily you are so kind with your words. What a compliment to be called a muse. :)
Caroline, Absolutely, perfectly beautiful description of journeying through life. Your repetition of "to where I am meant to be" is highly effective and oh, so true. Another all-time favorite for me among your beautiful, thought-filled garden of poetry! You are definitely a muse!
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@ Ghaelach thank you for your comments and stopping by!
@ Seeker7 thank you! I appreciate the comments.
@ Sky thank you for your kind words. You always give great advice.
@ Cheryl thank you very much. :)
@ Tom thanks for reading and your comment. Nice quote.
@ Always thank you always good to see you. :)
@ Gypsy than you, I'm glad you liked it.
@ Raciniwa thank you very much. :)
i want to count each step i take no matter how small or insignificant it is...great hub caroline...
That was one awesome and beautiful poem. I felt myself taking those steps along with you.
Beautiful Caroline..Stepping stones of life..Unique with a great message..Thank you...
C21,
Interesting netaphor- stepping stones to get through issues one step at a time..interesting how true, "The journey of 1,000 miles begins with 1 step"-maybe Confucious Lao Tsu...
TH
I loved the way you compare life with stepping stones. Beautiful poem. :)
Just keep laying those stepping stones, as you cross, remembering that they were somehow miraculously laid for you , so in exercising this beauty , lay at least one for your fellow man.
Love when you place your deep thoughts on here in poetry.
Bless.
I loved this poem and the photograph. Your words seem to describe me so well a few years ago! Have bookmarked as a favourite + voted up - excellent poem!
Hi Caroline.
The perfect poem of the journey and the struggles of life.
Well written.
Take care Caroline.
LOL Ghaelach
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Thank you again Michael. Very sweet of you!
Thank you Debby!
Hello Caroline. I see you are stepping forward now. Lovely image to go with your poem. Blessings, Debby
Nice, Caroline !
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Thank you Learner. :)
Very realistic thoughts and a lovely reading.Nice work :)
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