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Sugar Coated

Updated on April 2, 2013

I wanted to try something different. A little humor but with a little message. Simple, yet perfectly simple.

From the 2013 Falling Skies Collection

Sugar Coated

Round like a circle

Thick like a pipe

Sweetest to the taste

Softest to the bite

Glazed just a little

Frosted just the top

Maybe sprinkle around the whole

Or just the left or right

The randomness of choices

I just pick the one I like

Even though I see clearly

The middle isn’t right

There’s emptiness inside

I guess we call it life


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    • Eiddwen profile image

      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Very clever and I now look forward to many more.


    • Matt Marvin James profile image

      Matthew Marvin Coppedge 4 years ago from West Haven, Connecticut

      Thank you, I appreciate your words...

    • Marcy Goodfleisch profile image

      Marcy Goodfleisch 4 years ago from Planet Earth

      Sugar coated it right - I love the phrase 'emptiness inside' - that resonates with my take on the sugar-coated parts of life! Nice job!

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