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Sugar Coated Fun

Updated on January 20, 2013

For Private Eyes Only

This is not just a story but real live love

That triggers on emotion that starts with passion and sweets

I can't tell you I have finished when I haven't

I can't tell you I knew what was coming because I didn't

Surprises only make my body temperature rise

I know it was dark and I didn't fear a thing

I first felt a tickle then I tasted something sweet

I will often wonder if this day will ever be repeated

Who knows?

All I can say is I am tongue tied and not quite sure what has happened

My mouth left open wide

Fantasy and romance

Shooting stars on a cloudy sky

What could it be ?

Something very heavenly

That makes my body float

I could swear I was flying

Now I know this is the way I want to go

With a smile on my face and when everything happens simultanously

That a little sugar never hurt anyone

I think you would all agree


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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Valleypoet Letting my imagination do all the work.Thanx so much for reading.

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      Valleypoet 5 years ago

      A very sweet poem...descriptively, and literally...nicely done:-))

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      GypsyRose Lee It is great to forget all your worries and troubles and just be silly or creative or both.Thanx so much for reading.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Sometimes a little sugar coating can be nice.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      shiningirisheyes I just try to catch everyone on a sweet note.acaetnna Always fun to see you.Wishing you both a happy Martin Luther King day.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ah - lovely!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Yes - I would whole heartedly agree! Adorable and "sweet" poetry.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Mhatter99 Sometimes I don't know where my own thoughts come from.This is one of those times.I am glad you enjoyed my poem.Have a wonderful day.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      I agree. Thank you. By the way, great poem.