Sugar Coated Fun
For Private Eyes Only
This is not just a story but real live love
That triggers on emotion that starts with passion and sweets
I can't tell you I have finished when I haven't
I can't tell you I knew what was coming because I didn't
Surprises only make my body temperature rise
I know it was dark and I didn't fear a thing
I first felt a tickle then I tasted something sweet
I will often wonder if this day will ever be repeated
Who knows?
All I can say is I am tongue tied and not quite sure what has happened
My mouth left open wide
Fantasy and romance
Shooting stars on a cloudy sky
What could it be ?
Something very heavenly
That makes my body float
I could swear I was flying
Now I know this is the way I want to go
With a smile on my face and when everything happens simultanously
That a little sugar never hurt anyone
I think you would all agree
Comments
AUTHORValleypoet Letting my imagination do all the work.Thanx so much for reading.
A very sweet poem...descriptively, and literally...nicely done:-))
- AUTHOR
GypsyRose Lee It is great to forget all your worries and troubles and just be silly or creative or both.Thanx so much for reading.
Sometimes a little sugar coating can be nice.
- AUTHOR
shiningirisheyes I just try to catch everyone on a sweet note.acaetnna Always fun to see you.Wishing you both a happy Martin Luther King day.
Ah - lovely!
Yes - I would whole heartedly agree! Adorable and "sweet" poetry.
- AUTHOR
Mhatter99 Sometimes I don't know where my own thoughts come from.This is one of those times.I am glad you enjoyed my poem.Have a wonderful day.
I agree. Thank you. By the way, great poem.
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