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Summer Storm (Love Affair)

Updated on August 27, 2012
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The sensual decadence

A hot steamy storm

Melts everything away

From the earth

They together can play

The rain pours and washes

Lightening and thunder

Strike just at the right time

A heated love affair

A passion filled fest

So natural

Beautiful

A sexy test



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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Raciniwa. :)

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      mind tickling...

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Integrity. :)

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      I voted up for sure.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you MC :)

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      you have redefined thunder and lightening

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Astra thank you. :)

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      @ Hi XStatic thank you. :)

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      @ Hi Minnetonka thank you. :)

      @ Hi The Frog Prince thank you. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      One hot and sensual poem.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      mmmmmmmmmmm.....And, MMMMMMMMMM.....

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      shruti sheshadri 5 years ago from Bangalore, India

      beautiful, simple and elegant. creates a great feel while reading!

      voted up :)

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      What a storm! thanks

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I am always fearful when a storm appears, but your rendition puts a whole new meaning to a stormy love affair..Loved it..Cheers

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      The Frog Prince 5 years ago from Arlington, TX

      Very passionate use of words.

      TFP

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Love your romantic and steamy poem. One can only hope for that kind of relationship with a loved one. A connection that is rare and hopefully you have that with someone.

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Very sensual, the merging of energies and spirit. The reference to nature, which is what spirit comes from!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      very nice, Caroline. as usual !

      hope all is well , thinking of you always .

      Michael

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      My yes! Wonderful, sensual images. Up!

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      ... a beautiful and smoothly executed poem—the photo is perfect.

      ...voted up—DF

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      Barbara88 5 years ago from New york

      Very Enticing, love it!

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      Debbie Pinkston 5 years ago from Pereira, Colombia and NW Arkansas

      Beautiful and amazing what you can convey in very few words.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      yeah girl you got me voting up.. loved the passion!

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      BigEd 5 years ago

      Nice, very nice. Voted up, awesome, interesting and beautiful.

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Wow, a steamy sexy poem... sounds sweeping and dramatic... I love the way it glides... um, the hub I mean... :D