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Surprise... With An Afternoon Delight

Updated on May 15, 2013

A New Meaning To Good Afternoon

We are all so busy

I don't see us slowing down any time soon

With computers and all the television shows alone

It could be years before we see each other face to face

Unless we make special time for our lovers

We shock them

With the love we both enjoy so much

Remember finding time isn't always easy

Making time will make two people very happy

When out of the blue we see something that catches our eyes

Is it a naked smile or just little hugs that mean so much

A kiss on the neck that suggests where not done yet

A way of taking our lovers hand letting them know

We are not ready to let go

Caressing someones hair just so

A light massage that gives an instant message new meaning

A whisper that can be bearly heard

Leaving the other person begging

What did you say ?

It is amazing how fifteen minutes can turn into an hour

Time well spent

Rekindling a love that is here to stay


When all you do and say

Means the world is ours to share

As our bodies connect

A gentle kiss and the rest is history in the making


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    • DREAM ON profile image

      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Joy56 Practice makes perfect.Caring starts today and watching a love grow that never gets old.Thanx so much for reading and sharing.

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      Joy56 4 years ago

      we need a reminder to take time for the ones we love, every now and again..... DONT WE?

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I know you have many beautiful words that are begging to come out..Well how about if I give you an awesome smile one that glows in the dark.To make you laugh and think of all the funny things you have done.Words are not needed when all I really want is a friend.Kathryn Stratford Enjoying the people and the things we have no matter how few makes me think how blessed I am because I have room for so many new friends on my list.Thanx so much everyone.I love to write and read just like a first grader.I am always learning and listening so I can learn more.

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      Kathryn 4 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

      This is another sweet poem. I love it! "It could be years before we see each other face to face/Unless we make special time for our lovers". Very true words!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Beautiful beyond any words that l could say.

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      skye2day Opening our hearts up to the beauty of love brings us to a place where life never ends.I appreciate every time you get to read one of my poems. Thanx for all your inspirational comments.Have a beautiful weekend.

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      skye2day 4 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      Dream On Taking time wow what a concept. This is absolutely beautiful dream on. It is a treasure of wisdom to behold dear. We have a choice to stop and make time for the ones we love and the ones we do not love. Seek ye first the kingdom of God and all these other things shall be added unto you. Matthew 6v33

      You are precious indeed. I really enjoyed your works dream on. Many Blessing to you and yours each and every day. With Love, In Christ, Skye

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Gypsy Rose Lee To often we forget to thank the people who make our life so special and interesting.Thanx so much and I hope you enjoy a beautiful day.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up. This is so touching and true. We must remember to reach out to our loved ones and just some tender and loving time together can suddenly bring the sunshine out again.

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      DDE It is who we are as a person that makes us feel good.travmaj Love surrounds us every day.If we don't see it then we miss it.It does not mean love was not there.Thanx so much for reading.

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      Beautiful and refreshingly, romantic. Love from this perspective is all encompassing and lasting. Sadly, for many, it gets lost along the way. Thank you for your lovely words.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Every moment of each day should be treated special whether alone or with someone.

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      kidscrafts Way to go.Now that is lots of hand holding good enough for the Guiness Book Of World Records.I love that story.Thanx for sharing.writinglover Keep those scenes flowing.Because love is alive and well.Even though the newspapers don't think so.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Hey, Dream On! This was beautiful! This reminds me of a scene that I just written for one of my hubs! Anyway, I loved it! Voted up!

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very nice poem about love! It's important to take the time to be kind, to appreciate each other and have all those little gestures and words that mean "I love you".

      My husband and I, met in high school about 40 years ago... and we still hold hands :-)

      Thank you for sharing your beautiful words!

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Sparklea Whenever and wherever you are together is special time.Loving every moment and telling each other what it means fits into anyones busy schedule.If people spend time enjoying the love that you both create love becomes good to great.Thanx so much for sharing.Seeing other people in love is grand.My wife and I love holding hands reassuring each other no matter what happens we are here for each other.Have a wonderful night.

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      Sparklea 4 years ago from Upstate New York

      Voted up, useful and beautiful. "making time will make two people very happy." hit the nail on the head. Making time ...time that you do not think you most rewarding.

      Speaking from a female's perspective, I personally believe in the power of words...and actions...(like your example of how 15 minutes can turn into an hour)...beautifully written.

      My husband gave me a Mother's day card Sunday which started out, "I would give you the world if I could..." then continued, "for now you have my love always..." which I immediately burst into tears. WORDS.

      to express love, AND actions go together.

      Your statement "time well spent" is so inspirational. I hate wasting time, and sometimes we tend to neglect those we love because we think we don't 'have time'...but with this hub as an example, I think spending precious time with what you wrote, you actually gain time, and, somehow, miraculously, things DO get done.

      Blessings, Sparklea :)