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Sweet Death, Living Love
Living in Death
To love someone,
is to die.
With every breath,
and every sigh.
A new you is
reborn.
You do lose your heart,
so be warned.
It is a loss you will
not miss.
Especially when your lips,
touch in kiss.
Your two hearts now
beat as one.
It is at this moment,
new lives have begun.
Your eyes can see
each others soul.
To succeed together
is the new goal.
Yes to love someone
is to die.
Ti's the sweetest death,
and this is no lie.
Comments
Beautifully written! :)
wow, that is wonderful!! really pleased to have found your work and look forward to reading more. voted up and beautiful :)
- Author
Thank you so very much ikigaid, and secondimage. I do love getting comments on my work, the good , the bad, and the ugly, lol. Reading them helps me grow as a writer. So I appreciate the time and comment. Blessings, peace, love, and light.
Love this !! Awesome piece of work!
Wonderful poem, voted up and beautiful.
Nice flow of poetic reasoning having contrasting themes yet passionately harmonized together. Voted up...
- Author
Thank you very much Debbie Dallas, Writer20,gregb4hope. I appreciate the comments and your time for rrading. Blessings
Such a bold and unusual poem about love and death. It is about love felt at a very strong and deep level.
- Author
appreciate the comment. This to was also bout my love. Blessings peace love and light.
Ohhh, Me likey!
- Author
Thank you kitty dreamer appreciate the comment blessings
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