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The World's Rare Poetic Muse : Standing Ovation to Mentalist Acer

Updated on July 7, 2017

Dear Readers,


Have you ever meet Mentalist Acer here in HubPages?


Those who read his works must be agree with me, this Poet very complicated one. He totally turned those hard words inside textbooks into poem, distracting real meaning of his words into something really different.


The first time I read his poem I got headache! Honest! He said something which seem meaningless to me but somehow really tickled my brain. I hate when I couldn’t able to understand what I read (it something about my inferior feeling as none English native speaker, I guess) so I kept coming and just like I thought, became more confuse than ever before! ;))


Then I just gave up trying. I still keep coming and reading and getting confuse, but then when I was not trying at all, Mentalist Acer’s works became nicer, more open and more enjoyable for me. I guess somehow, when my ability to enjoying poem as it is; had grow; Mentalist Acer’s perspective in writing seem had changed too. Giving our world a chance to see a world inside his eyes.


For this one of a kind Poet, I believe he deserve of our standing ovation.^_^


Please enjoy.

Freya

Somewhere

In another part of this world


There’s a Land of these smart creatures


They gives love a name inside our poems


And song;


A beautiful opening rhythms


Muse


That’s how they had been called


Fuse into our minds


And give us everything we need to be able to flow


Give ideas of lines


Or sweetness to writing a new song


God’s blessing Angels


It is what they are


Whispering a dream into inspiration


Give colors to our simple existence


Help human grow into different creation



Between the common


There always rare one existed


This one not just following


The steps they used to flowing


Twisting life around


He put different perspective into mind


Planting Roses on the stones


Creating another definition


Giving nights very bright sky


And turning the days become darker than ever


Then text books turned into books of poem


Pushing simple hard until it bloomed


And became complicated


Poetic lines then changed


Rafting slowly into logical theories


But it still hiding too many meaning


Absorbed life into different way of thinking



He must had been stroke you at dawn


That rare Muse from far away land


Gave you his beautiful but truly strangest shine


To gave the world a chance to see


A different side of another beauty


What they used to called as;


A distinct part of the mind


He put rainbow in your thought


Seduced you to sing in different tone


Introducing life to amazing side of subjective


To give this world another perspective


If simple is easy


Common is normal


Unique is acceptable


Then you...


You are a Rare Muse himself


An alien inside his own world


A very unusually beautiful mind


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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I tried dark style so many times but seem far from successful because it seem hard for me to turn off the light when I need to. Hehehe... You should keep on writing yourself, dear. And writing a song, maybe. Must be great to start, right?

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    Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

    No need to thank me, your words most of the times are filled with support and encouraging words! Love your works:D and always keep on writing since your words are those of humanity as well :D:D:D

    Bless you

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky Dee: Just trying to expressing my feeling, like you always do too, King Micky. Hehehe... Happy cycling, sir. Thank you.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    TonyMac: Lovely? I'm not sure Mentalist Acer will be happy being called as lovely. Hehehe... Thank you, Sir. I'm glad you like it.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Gustheredneck: Awww!That is so sweet! Thank you, Gus. Ah, I am so happy! Hehehehe

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Uriel : You and Mentalist Acer really unique poets and this uniqueness captivated me a lot. Beside, I did nothing but enjoying your works. One or two poem to expressing my feeling just casual habit of mine, so it's nothing but simple appreciation. I'm glad both of you like it too. ^_^

    Thank you, Sis.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Waalaikum salam, Agus Fanani: LOL! Don't say so far it is the pictures you like better than the poem. Hahaha.

    Thank you, bro.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Mentalist Acer: With all my pleasure, Prof. But you really deserve all words! Beautiful mind, is what you are! ^_^

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Yo Freya! That Mentalist acer is some fine poet indeed! God bless you for high-lighting this master!

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    Tony McGregor 6 years ago from South Africa

    Lovely tribute to a lovely person here on HubPages, by another lovely person here! Your beauty shines a light on all of us, Freya, thank you.

    Love and peace

    Tony

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    Gustave Kilthau 6 years ago from USA

    Hi Freya - I figured out why I like to read your stuff. You are just plain nice to everyone. We all like that very much. Thanks.

    Gus :-)))

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    Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

    Freya, indeed He is one of a kind, special in his way of thinking and tackling reality and beyond! Genuine talent :D

    Freya, i really loved this poem as well, and i happened to read the comment on one of his hubs once and i thought you could've turned it into a hub, WHICH YOU DID WITHOUT ME EVEN SAYING A WORD!!!!! Beautiful words that always convey a deeper more genuine message. You really have a big heart, that includes both Mentalist Acer and I:D

    Thank you,

    Sara

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    agusfanani 6 years ago from Indonesia

    Assalaum'alaikum Freya,Those cute panda pictures also help me understand how to enjoy the poem. Thank you.

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    Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    He must had been stroke you at dawn

    That rare Muse from far away land

    Gave you his beautiful but truly strangest shine

    To gave the world a chance to see

    A different side of another beauty

    What they used to called as;

    A distinct part of the mind

    He put rainbow in your thought

    Seduced you to sing in different tone

    Introducing life to amazing side of subjective

    To give this world another perspective

    From a mono-liquistic to a multi-liquistic,My peer,my Angel Freya,who hypnotizes and multiplies the integrity of HubPages into cosmic proportion,my appreciation for your heart and friendship is measured in loving friendship.;))

    P.S go to Toxic Awareness,your comment is in the Hub...with grattitude,Bryan.;))

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    This is the original poem which I had to put at comment capsule so it won't put me in danger to get flag because I wrote it at Mentalist Acer's comment capsule at first. hehehe

    "Rare muse dancing

    Twisting life around

    Giving night bright sky

    and turning the day become darker

    Then text book has turned into poem

    and simple then became complicated

    Poem had changed into logic

    But the line still hiding too many meaning

    They must had been stroke you at dawn

    Gave you their beautiful but truly strangest mind

    To gave the world

    Different kind of works to applaud"