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Triplets #1-3

Updated on May 14, 2019
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Women are a beautiful much needed creations. Wirhout women us men would not have children. So, respect our women!



There's a lot of laughter

All that I'm after

If this life leads to disaster

I'd be afraid to carry

Emotions while you stare at me

Still it's you I'd marry



A day burning long
Lasts until this song
What could go wrong

Things alike never last
Out a window, oh so fast
Burning won't return back


My Fair Lady

Oh, you my fair lady
So imperfect, oh, maybe
A sorta lickin' actin' shady

How a person so far you
Never seeing thing's through
With that, what's left that's true


--> The above are my first attempts at "triplets or trecets," and these are just the first there will be many more along with "Sonnets & Haiku's." If you like what you've been reading, on my newly founded "newer" styles, please feel free to tell me. Don't hesitate to leave me creative criticism.

© 2010 Dom Shadows


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      11 years ago

      I think you aced it, great job, loved them

      thank you


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      Dom Shadows 

      11 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      katrina.. Thank you so much.. do you know each one is separate? 6verse each rhyme pattern aaa bbb ..Triplets. Did you think it were as one together?

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      11 years ago from Seward, Pa

      This poem is amazing! It really expresses the pain and longing we feel when we love

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      Dom Shadows 

      11 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      ty everyone for the nice words.. I like writing the triplets though they are fun..

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      11 years ago from Great Britain

      It moves along carrying me with it. Nice one . Cheers.

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      11 years ago

      A true romantic could only pen this poem. Stay away from those shady women, look for an angel with a pure heart to compliment your own. Great read.

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      Moulik Mistry 

      11 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Nice, very nice - well done...

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      11 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      You're welcome ! ( Blushing)

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      Dom Shadows 

      11 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Tantrum- really? TY- for some reason when you say those things from you they mean a lot.. ty

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      Dom Shadows 

      11 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Pretty--Ty.. Once so in love..

    • tantrum profile image


      11 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      Things alike never last

      Out a window oh so fast

      Burning won't return back

      I like this ! :)

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      11 years ago from US

      nice and ah so in love, Maita

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      11 years ago from INDIA

      Very nice verses! I love it!


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