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Tearing You Up Freakin' Good

Updated on December 16, 2014

Enjoy it with our chosen melody-- credits to Jodeci


Freakin' Free !

From the very beginning we set the rules

the very minute you close that door

we start to sense what we came for

just tease me and pass me by and feel that stupor

Tearing up, right and left...enough of calling for help!

falling pieces of sweetest curves that coudn't be held

symmetry with the deepest candy as a reward

touching the very middle of that freaking mind



Vicious secret of mine finally being shared with you

ticking you up and down, left and right... Oh so true!

blood coming to the rescue of preheated suffocation

touching the right angles and scratching my own sensations


The science of love through word of mouth

action reaction to that staring of yours

mutual segregation that will meet right there

hold it, wait for my brain to catch up ... this is not fair!


More than just physically driven

we have concocted a ritual with no deceiving

One, two, three, up down to the left

four, five and six, seems like we just have met


keeping counting the math that will keep us entertained

right angles that will reach deepest concerns

A sensual woman will recognize the signs

freakin' good! Oh my..oh my!!


open the doors that will make me scream

did you just hear what you said?

keep hangin' in there through shades that make me care

getting to the window of life, dare me now... dare...!


Thank God for the woman that is coming with me

to the dreaded carousel of truest love indeed

break that protocol and keep coming again

to the place where we will reach that sparkling milky way



More secrets can be revealed if you stand still and hear

more chances will come through this quill

bending red hot needs that suddenly knelt down.

finally realizing that these lessons set that freakin' life free...!




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  • Lord De Cross profile image

    Joseph De Cross 3 years ago

    Well, thanks so much Mary A.K.A. Tillsontitan. The words add science to the beauty of lovemaking. Let's the readers find out!

    Thanks again!

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    Mary Craig 3 years ago from New York

    If I might say, every freakin comment here was right! The more you read the more steam you feel.

    Joe there are so many sides to you and I know this is an interesting one.

    Voted all the way across and let the reader interpret!

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    picklesandrufus, Lol!

    Well, you can tell by the comments my friend. Glad you enjoyed it! Have a wonderful day my friend!

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    picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

    You were on fire with this hub! It is absolutely electric!

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Oh Gosh Movie Master, sorry for the lateness... just want you to forgive us for answering this late. Personal issues get on the way. Thanks so much for stopping by and leave some hub-luv comment!

    @Rasma, catching up with you as well. You deserve respect and we are glad to be your friend. This inspiration is from within, and can be felt! You have a wonderful day!

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    Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

    Fantastic. Voted up and awesome. Loved this crazy ride on the love carousel. Passing this on.

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    Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    Very creative - great work, loved it and voted up!

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Kelly, Thomas thanks for stopping by. You are cool and funny. glad you enjoyed it!

    @Janine, I guess is in us! Inspiration comes easily. I added some more seeint that people liked this piece. Thanks!

    @Imkarn23, I know you got the message perfectly. You did leave a steamy message indeed. Great!

    @Thanks Lifesparadox. You did write less that we expected. I guess took time to recover yourself..? Thanks!

    @ KJ, the "milky way bar" are on special on Walmart. But you always leave funny comments! Much appreciated for taking your time and read it thrice..?

    @Billy, don't get jealous. We are jealous of your fans (kidding) We just get in the mood and write....what a mood right? Thanks my friend!

    @Kelley! Lol! You are jealous too? Don't worry. We all have qualities and we all contribute to this world. Thanks wonderful mommy!

    @ Curiad, the best pieces were written after midnight and in the peace of the moment. Hope to read your work afterwards. Have a nice one!

    @LeeTea, Thanks for writing this way. We wrote with fine words, so we can share feelings allowed by the system. Welcome to HP!

    @ Lathing mix muses, past memories and a little of sensuality and you get to that cloud "60+9." Thanks my friend... you are still reading it? You bad girl!

    @Josh!! Buddy, the admiration is reciprocal, we love your hubs and dedication. Thnaks for being so supportive! Have a great weekend!

    @Tammy Lol! You are speechless still? That was a cute answer from our NC blonde. Thanks for making us smile!

    @Pickles! Can you imagine someone stopping by and write: "flagged for plagiarism"? That would be worst than a tornado. Thanks! Yeah, when we want to write poetry, we just write it from scratch!

    @BlossomSB, I understand your response. The style is just ours...and we do not follow rules. Thanks for reading us!

    @TToombs08, You really touched me with your words opf appreciation. I love your funny hub, and will catch up withy ya soon! Great to see you in here!

    @Cloud Explorer, certainly you leave juicy comments as well. We are surprised we didn't get this hub banned. Your inout is very appreciated. I'm so behind in reading is pathetic. You have a wonderful day of creativity bro'.

    @Pam99, Well, yeah: Visions added to keywords for the senses cna make wonders. How we do it? It is just done, without hesitation.

    @ Faith Reaper, Thanks for the southern response. We smiled with your comment. We can read on our IPhone, and we know before hand if our hubs are being read. Your words make me smile like a kid: Whoah!

    @CarlySullens, What a wonderful feedbaaaaakkk! from you! Oh my! I thought your keyboard got stuck for 5 seconds! Thansk so much for stopping by! You don't hide your emotions. On fridays? We work and sometimes read or write. We get more creative after 1 a.m. Funny right?

    @Always Exploring, Hahaha! You did good! between the lines there is a charm. You are a wonderful follower Rubi! We know you will always come around...and we thank you for that!


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    Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

    My goodness, Oh Lordy are you ever hip. I read between the lines, I had to focus or lose my grip. Way to go Joseph..Cheers

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    CarlySullens 5 years ago from St. Louis, Missouri

    HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!! This was the most sensual experience I have had on hub pages. So what are you doing next Friday night. LOL.

    Way to go. This was really, really good. I don't know what I want more now, my husband or chocolate. Oh, I will get both.

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    Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

    Whoa, there lord!!! As Scarlet O'Hara said, or whoever said it, someone in the south, "I believe I have the vapors!" Ha. I had to read it a couple of times too - to bad you don't get points for double, triple reads or do you? Ha. You have done well with the exquisite chocolates. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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    Pamela Oglesby 5 years ago from United States

    Stunning and thought provoking. This was a beautiful piece of work. Very creative.

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    Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

    Very unique side of you Lord, I love your poetry for it show cases many aspects of your humor, your love for scientific things with the whole angles technique you used, and it also encompasses whole parts of reality as well, which appeals to the senses a great deal.

    Wonderful poem, and it scored with me in a huge way, you are a great poet as well as awesome writer.

    Cheers to powerful word usage of the Iambic. Voted upper and outty.

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    Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

    A very stimulating and covers all the bases. Great job, Joseph! Very creative and uniquely you. :)

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    Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

    Interesting and different. You have a great vocab and I like the way you use words.

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    picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

    Wow, this one came from somewhere very special inside of you...pure creativity!

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    Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

    I am ususally not rendered speechless, but all I can say is DAMN!

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    Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania


    Now this a freaking good poem! :)

    You have the ability to write beautiful, powerful and captivating poetry buddy! Thanks for sharing; I am sharing as well!

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    LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

    Very interesting..... Read it few times too.... Will probably read it few more times! Is this from the muses or from the heart, probably will never know!

    Awesome, and beautiful....

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    Lee Tea 5 years ago from Erie, PA

    Your writing here communicates actual feelings...about the closest we can get to shared experience without actually sharing one. Thanks for taking the time. Inspired by both what you wrote and how you wrote this.

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    Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

    Amazingly different Joseph. The places out minds can go is truly unlimited!

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    kelleyward 5 years ago

    Wow! Very moving. I like Bill am jealous ;) Kelley

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    Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

    You are sooooo good, Joseph! I had to read this twice to make sure I didn't miss anything. Wow! There are rare times when I'll read the work of someone else and I'll be jealous that I didn't write that....this is one of those time.

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    kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

    lord de cross...loved the words...obviously a deep meaning... however ...maybe it was the pics of chocolate..the appearance of white chocolate rose, outerspace ....and the waves ( hunger pangs) hitting the sides of my tummy... I have a craving for a " milky way bar"....enjoyed the hub and the bar.....

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    lifesparadox 5 years ago from USA

    Holy Moly! I love this, great work! : )

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    Karen Silverman 5 years ago

    Rules...stupor...tearing up...mind..secret..ritual..carousel..protocol..kneeling down...


    This woman recognizes the signs...they are abundant and clear..

    Tick, tick, tick...

    Thank you

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    Janine Huldie 5 years ago from New York, New York

    This was as you put it, "Freakin Good" and really loved how you put Jodeci in this one as well!! I haven't thought of them in years, but nice inclusion. Your poem was so thought provoking and definitely left me wanting more so to speak. Very nice job here Joseph and have voted and shared too!!

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    ThoughtSandwiches 5 years ago from Reno, Nevada


    Wowzers...this was carnally cool! Nice job my friend!


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    Kelly Umphenour 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

    Oh my word! Uh oh wait no they were yours! Good ones too! Great job:)