Storm/ Love poem
Storm/ Love poem
My heart beats fast
When I think of you.
My mind goes cloudy,
I don't know what to do.
I close my eyes,
Your face I see.
My emotions go wild,
You won't let me be.
You rob me of all,
My waking hours.
I sense in you,
A strong drawing power.
My control is gone,
When you are near.
I think to myself,
How did I end up here.
When I see you coming,
I lose control again.
As I watch you leave,
My storm begins.
Comments
Lovely peom. Well written.
Thank you. I have been writing poems since i was 11 years old.
that was great! you're an awesome poet
- Author
Thank you have always enjoyes writing poems
really good...I'm actually feeling the samething about someone ....unfortunatly.
I know it sucks! but go one day at a time and everything will be as it should be!
SO cute and so sweet. I'm an instant fan :)
again another gem of yours, full of emotion, loved it!
Tasting love on the winds of dreams I see in your eyes something painful but so beautiful. You have touched my heart again, and I thank you for the blessing you are.
Thank you Johnny I appreciate all the comments you have left. I hope it will continue as I will continue reading and commenting on yours. Blessings my friend
Perfect poem! Thank you!
- Author
Thank you so much. I enjoy writing poetry the same as short stories. Thanks for the comment. blessings
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