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Storm/ Love poem

Updated on July 15, 2013

Storm/ Love poem

  My heart beats fast

When I think of you.

My mind goes cloudy,

I don't know what to do.

I close my eyes,

Your face I see.

My emotions go wild,

You won't let me be.

You rob me of all,

My waking hours.

I sense in you,

A strong drawing power.

My control is gone,

When you are near.

I think to myself,

How did I end up here.

When I see you coming,

I lose control again.

As I watch you leave,

My storm begins.


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    • 4elements profile image

      4elements 4 years ago

      Thank you so much. I enjoy writing poetry the same as short stories. Thanks for the comment. blessings

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Perfect poem! Thank you!

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      4elements 6 years ago

      Thank you Johnny I appreciate all the comments you have left. I hope it will continue as I will continue reading and commenting on yours. Blessings my friend

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      Johnny Love 6 years ago

      Tasting love on the winds of dreams I see in your eyes something painful but so beautiful. You have touched my heart again, and I thank you for the blessing you are.

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      K.A.E Grove 7 years ago from Australia

      again another gem of yours, full of emotion, loved it!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      SO cute and so sweet. I'm an instant fan :)

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      4elements 7 years ago

      I know it sucks! but go one day at a time and everything will be as it should be!

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      Mystique Scorpio 7 years ago from Edmonton Alberta ;)

      really good...I'm actually feeling the samething about someone ....unfortunatly.

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      4elements 7 years ago

      Thank you have always enjoyes writing poems

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      Jessie 7 years ago

      that was great! you're an awesome poet

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      4elements 7 years ago

      Thank you. I have been writing poems since i was 11 years old.

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      kirutaye 7 years ago from London, UK

      Lovely peom. Well written.