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That moment

Updated on March 6, 2013

You smile

You lift your shoulders

You blink

You bite your lip

I sure I know your feelings

Can't let this moment slip

Is it all about the timing

Will cupid shoot his bow

Shall I taste your lips today

Or again let courage go

For I have faced some deamons

Fought men near twice my size

So why does fear fall upon me

When I look into your eyes

Is it because love plays this way

It starts as a cruel game

Where two souls need to open up

And say they feel the same


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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      You're so right, Jon. The scary part is taking that first leap!

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      Ashley 4 years ago from Roosevelt Utah

      I miss that feeling. I think you captured it perfectly.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Thanks for dropping in Laura I so glad you enjoyed my poem many people have encouraged me to keep writing and I am forever grateful to all of these wonderful people (you know who you are) who have been my insparational support through my trails over the last twelve months. Thanks to you all !!!


      Simba is my pen name is your really Laura ?? ;) X

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      Laura 4 years ago

      Reads quite a few poems on this site often.. Have never commented before. But felt I had to leave one yyy... Simba 73. Wot an amazing poem and so true....

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      epigramman 4 years ago more my friend before I hit the road to dreamland .....

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      That moment is the best and worst for me every time Epi !!

      And I'm still looking for my last one yet ! hahaha !!

      I think I will take your kind words and keep this up my freind :)

      It's..... hang on ......10.11am gmt across the pond


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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Yes it's true though isn't it - we all look for 'that moment' in our real lives but the way you write my friend and so romantically I can see/read a lot of 'moments' in your poetry.

      Long may you run Neil Young once sang ....

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Good morning Mhatter99,

      You are more than welcome, and it's great to be back !!!

      Loving your writes btw !!!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Hi Faith Reaper,

      Once again thank you so much for dropping in I look forward to your comments so much, and how you always see deeply into my writes.



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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful words about love and they way it really does play sometimes. It is a must to open up and say for sure so there will be no doubt!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper