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That Stranger There (tanka)

Updated on June 26, 2013

What flowers will bloom

In the footsteps left behind

From that stranger there

Whose music caused hearts to dance

Through a dream of what might be


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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Boy how I love your tankas! I'd reference my favorite line, but look silly repeating the entire tanka! :D Beautiful, nonetheless!

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      Patricia Scott 3 years ago from sunny Florida

      Dreaming of what might .....I have done that a few times.

      thank you for sharing your carefully chosen expressive tanka with us.

      Angels are winging their way to you this morning. ps

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      "Dreaming is free" as the song goes and when one dreams, one has hope for the future.

      Lovely as always.

      Voted up ++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Thomas Silvia 3 years ago from Massachusetts

      Thanks for sharing this awesome tanka !

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Dreams cantake you to such strange thoughts and sometimes to the most funfilled thoughts

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      Sueswan 3 years ago

      Hi Mhatter

      "Whose music caused hearts to dance" Beautiful and joyful.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Beautiful Martin!

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      lovedoctor926 3 years ago

      Dreams are our escape from reality. Beautiful

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      Madeleine Salin 3 years ago from Finland

      This tanka is like a soft and relaxing thought. So beautiful...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Simply dreamy.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      That was very beautiful.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Beautiful Sir Martin.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Amen to that.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Not be redundant, but that was beautiful.

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