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April-National Poetry Month - Poem 2

Updated on April 21, 2012
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Poem 2

Breezing through

Day 2

I am loose

As a goose

Rhyming verse, quite obtuse

Metering lines

Like Dr. Suess

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Trying, less

Lying? Yes

Thoughts arising

To and fro

Hangin', moving

nice and slow

Only 28 days

To go



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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      On to the third! What a crazy 30/30. I cannot wait to read the ones to come. I may have missed your first going back soon. Jamie

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      Maree Michael Martin 5 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

      This is great! You have many of us writing poems too. Yikes, I am behind schedule! Thanks for this wonderful idea. It is only day 2 where I live.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      And on to the 3rd!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and funny. That was good keep going.

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      Victoria Stephens 5 years ago from London

      I like the idea of a 30 day poem chalange, good luck with it.x

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My lovely Ann,

      I am falling in love with you,

      or maybe it's your poetry,

      thats so cool

      it's just the way I like it

      short and sweet , just like you

      Are you taller than Scooby Do ?

      And are you married and to who?

      and call me.

      Michael, so I won't be blue

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Clever and catchy. Nice work.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      tappin' my toe, fer sure! I love Dr. Seuss! BUT....

      That Cleaner Three,

      Said he loved me!

      Oh, how can that be?

      Fickle - Clearly! (LOL)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      is it possible to be

      in love with three?

      or more, or is it just me?

      who throws words of love

      to all the women I see,

      shame on me!

      You should know that

      it is only thee

      I should give my love so free

      see.

      .

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      I am so late with this. Hello Jhamann. Crazy? Yes.

      I'm working on #6 today. Thanks for the look-see. AD

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Ruby! I'm behind schedule to! Welcome to the club. Write on! AD

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Joyce....help!

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      5 and counting

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Thanks for the encouragement. I am surprised at how many people are doing this. We are all crazy. Thanks for votes. Ann Davis

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      I need luck...oh well I guess I need prayers. Thank you Victoria...Thank you for the comment. I see you are level 2. I am going to check out your profile.

      Have a great day! Ann

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      ananceleste, what does that mean?

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Funny and clever you are, Cleaner3. Thanks for the accolades!

      Ann

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Thanks mckbird...is your name Mike? I have seen reference to that, I think.

      Always appreciate your comments.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Betrayal!!!! I feel the frost!

      ImKarn, Loved this comment. lol lol.

      Every thing will be allright as long as you keep tapping your toe! Fer sure!

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      cleaner3....you should sign up to be the next bachelor! Bet you could charm a whole bunch of bachelorettes!

      Thanks for the comment! Have a happy day! Ann Davis

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