The Black Pearl
A little bit of darkness
Spun into beauty
Transforming
Itself
To purity
A cycle of life
Shimmering
Incandescent
A life within
Has taught
All the secrets
All the lies
Manifested
Rebirthed
Into a new form
What lies within
Can be made
Into something new
Deep pain
Transcended
From
Beautiful sin
Comments
Caroline , I love this poem .it reflects your deep thoughts of transformation ,from something dark and sullen into a thing of special beauty ..one of a kind , just like you are.
Michael
I agree with Michael. This is beautiful, a rebirth from darkness into light. Loved it...
Beautiful, Caroline. Sounds a little like the evolution of my life.
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Hi Michael thank you for your kind thoughts. I always appreciate you stopping by. :)
Hi Ruby thank you my friend for your kind words. :)
Hi Wayne thank you for stopping by, yes it is like the evolution of life. :)
Nice words chosen for this piece. Great image. I like "Shimmering...
Incandescent...A life within" Thank you.
WOW - i LOVE the deeper message here, my friend!
deeper - not necessarily darker..lol..
beautifully done!
voting up and sharing forwardxx
Very interesting. Your poetry spun images, which is a wonderful thing.
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Thank you Ytsenoh. :)
Thank you Leslie. :)
Thank you Mcbirdbks. :)
I like it !!
ButI also am sure There is a deeper message here, although I think I will be reading it a few times to see if I can decipher it , which of course is going to be a pleasure !! beautiful writing :)
Simba
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Thank you Simba. :)
Deep, lofty, beautiful. Thanks Caroline.
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Thank you Manatita. :)
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