The Bombshell
She comes in
All jaws drop
She's the bombshell
She will make your heart
Stop
She glides in
As cool as she pleases
Batting her eyelashes
Only a glimpse
To anyone who sees
Curvacious splendor
Surrounds her very being
She's a goddess
With no end
No beginning
She will make you stare
Without blinking
The men stand
Ready to please her
Comments
I like it -- I could not tell you exactly why. I also could not tell you why one woman is a bombshell apart from the others -- oh well.
sign me up let me glance at the bombshell..:) great poem my friend
Ha, I think the two fellas above like your bombshell and so do I...
The bombshell has landed - beware! But often the person herself is unaware of the impact she has made, and that's the best way. Made me smile with your poem.
great poem Caroline..
Great writing and imagination.
Great poem. Her heart is a weapon.
Hi Caroline.... Great poem, great we have connected...
Hugs from Canada
- Author
Thank you all very much for all your kind words and support. :)
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