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The Echo...

Updated on July 31, 2013
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I heard it

haven't I heard that before

Am I original or just

my own rebound-reversed reflection

How far have I traveled

Have I waned

How loud am I

Have I faded

Unraveled or reverberation

Mortal or apparition

Premonition deja vu

I could swear

that I came in through this door.

Hello!

Hello!



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      bizarrett81 4 years ago from Maine

      Wow! Amazing and thought provoking.

      "Am I original or just

      my own rebound-reversed reflection"

      Great lines... Reflects so many things I have wondered myself! Another outstanding peice

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      I think you're a little biased. : )

      Thank you sweetie.

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Excellent and thought provoking!

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      bizarrett81 4 years ago from Maine

      See, xstatic agrees with me. Not biased = )

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you xstatic

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Well Sir Wayne - all of your work and your hallowed words echo with me everytime I arrive here.

      Wishing you and your family a happy Sunday full of love , joy and peace and contentment from Colin and his cats watching daybreak over the lake at lake erie time ontario canada 8:37am

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you, Colin. And may you have a wonderful Sunday morning as well.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      To reflect or not to reflect--whatever you decide, I am with you all the way. The message is perfect, but the entrance is in there, somewhere.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thanks again, Deb. I appreciate the comments!

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      Diane Denison 3 years ago from Cincinnati

      How loud am I, have I faded. You haven't faded.... I feel like that sometimes..

      Cool poem

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Thank you Diane. I'm sure you had to dig deep for this one.

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