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The Final Prayer

Updated on April 3, 2011


My faith erodes into disbelief

on the shore of my conscience

decimated by lust and desire

setting my soul on fire


Remorse seeping through my senses

Regret letting down my defenses

I'm a captive of my own duress

fading light in a dark abyss



still i pray for one last time

till my words begin to rhyme

yearn for all i have lost

and all that was once mine

as i lay plagued for tonight

i have to see through a different mind

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      misslee 6 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

      I wish I knew what could inspire such lovely poetry, but I suppose that is every writer's secret...

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      Maybe that is a question aimed at yourself, cause i find your poetry very inspiring =)

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Very cool man, the second verse was awesome.

      Short, and powerful. Great wording, seriously.

      Keep rockin it

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      thank you ben for your great feedback as always.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

      Second poem of yours I've read where you decry your lust. Are you religious? Maybe a priest is in order.

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      h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

      I read this somewhere and i'll share it with you

      "i can resist anything but temptation" - oscar wilde.

      and it saddens me to realise how true this is.

      yes. I'm a muslim.

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      La Papillon 5 years ago from Melbourne, Australia

      Sometimes 'loss', remorse and/or an event which deeply touches or 'hits' the soul can lead to new, different and even sometimes better ways of viewing the/our world.

      Or such experience can taint the soul forever.

      Love your works ;)

      You talented thing you...;)

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      h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

      well, i guess mine is tainted forever. lol.

      Ta!!

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