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The First ...Chapter 4

Updated on April 23, 2012

Adriana walked into the stone home and was suprised with the interior. It looked like the inside of a 18th century castle . It had long purple drapes covering the main windows with a large chandelier hanging from the center of the high ceiling. The interior was like she had just walked into the past, Adriana was stunned with it's size and beauty. She thought for a moment that her eyes were deceiving her, for the home seemed much larger from the inside than it was on the outside.

Michael took her coat and they walked into the next room, the first thing she saw was the black shiny piano that sat on a black and white tile floor, by itself on one side of the room. On the other side there was a beautiful old loveseat that had been recovered in dark red silken fabric. It sat on a large thick rug facing a stone fireplace that seemed to crawl up the wall into the next floor of the home. The fireplace eminated a smell of sweet cherry wood burning in it. Adriana sat down while Michael walked over to a small bar and pulled out two glasses and poured from a bottle that contained a red liquid. Michael walked back and sat down right beside her. You have a beautiful home she said, as Michael sipped from his glass, with out answering.

Adriana took a drink from her glass and turned and looked into Michael's eyes. She felt a wave of sublime pleasure start to run through her body, a feeling that she remembered from her dream. Michael leaned over and took her hand and pulled her close to him. The room went very quiet, even the fire it seemed had stopped crackling. As Michael kissed her deeply and pulled her to him, the room seemed to start to spin and suddenly went dark. The last thing she remembered was the sound of piano music in her head.

When Adriana awoke her long blonde hair was down and she was naked laying in this huge bed. She looked around the room very confused. She felt different in some strange way, that she could not focus on exactly. she heard a voice faintly in her head, it was Michael. Adriana was beginning to feel scared now. She heard Michael telling her to calm down, relax, and let him into her thoughts, don't fight , give in to me. Adriana felt a sensation of warmth again welling deep inside of her, a soothing feeling that she could not overcome. Her thoughts were coming back to her of last night...

After the deep kiss, Michael got up and walked over to the piano. He sat down and said, let me play for you my lovely, you shall be my first, you will lead the way for all to come, Yes... I have searched for ages for the right one, and you are the one. Adriana tried to move but she could not, the music held her spellbound. Michael got up from the piano and slowly walked over to Adriana, lifting her so easily and said let us dance my lovely. He took her in his arms and the music grew louder and louder, as the room began to spin around, she felt as if they were floating , she could not feel the floor. Adriana's thoughts were filled with pleasure as it started to consume her, the voice of Michael was in her head, telling her to give herself to him.

The next thing she remembered was Michael laying her on the bed, she knew she did not have any clothes on but did not remember how they came off. She felt Michael lay next to her, felt his body, but it was so cold, felt his lips kissing her, but she also felt the chill they contained. The only thing that felt so good was when he put his mouth on her neck, his breath was hot like a fire that ran over her body like molten lava, looking for somewhere to cool off. It was so pleasurable that she could still feel it even though it had happened last night.... What the hell happened ? How did i get in this bed ? Where is Michael? The window was open and she could hear the birds singing, it appeared to be a bright sunny day.

Adriana's mind was racing, she rose up and found a silk robe waiting for her on the end of the bed. As she wrapped it around her naked body and she started for the door, she heard heavy footsteps approaching, so she went back to the bed and waited to see who it was. The door swung open and her heart jumped.......


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    • raciniwa profile image

      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, you're such a tease Michael...but you keep me spellbound...ecstatic...

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      Andee Rose Carpenter 6 years ago from Past the sunrise, left of the moon


      I will have to hold off on reading the other chapters, in spite of how interesting they are...

      You are a great writer!!!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Hi Michael really good writing. I need to go back and read the other chapters.

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine, thanks for your support. I can only tell you to reread it and you will find the clues. They are littered throughout the first chapters.

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Laura, thank you for the read. you still haven't commented on whether you like it or not. Very interesting. the only real drug is passion that comes from within. which we all need.

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ann, I can't tell you what is going on, then you will stop reading . do I have you hooked? Thanks for the kind comments and your support.

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      KatrineDalMonte 6 years ago

      Well Michael I'm trying to understand myself what happened after they had that drink...His home sounds fascinating and mysterious too. Good writing, I got completely lost in time...Awaiting the next part soon...

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      laurathegentleman 6 years ago from Chapel Hill, NC

      She's been drugged? Interesting...

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      Angelme566 6 years ago

      Wasn't able to read previous chapters..

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      anndavis25 6 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      WHAT is going on? This poor girl must have had a little something in her drink. Is she dreaming again? Or hallucinating?

      Visual and enticing writing....


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