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...The Gathering Red Storm...

Updated on September 29, 2012

Death besets the Sorceress

the Gathering Red Storm Swells

it blithely rises in Her chest

and pushes against Her face, burning

Iniquity releases itself into ethereal waves

touching both sea and sky

rivets of black laughter seamlessly torch

the Night

Her hands cover the face of the moon

Her voice shatters the illusion you've spun

and just when you thought She had receded

She stands scorching, blistering the sun...





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    TheDailyMessenger 4 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

    Carole,

    your welcome, and by the way, do you have any advice for making a good story, because, I am a writer and I want to learn to be a great writer.

    again your welcome, and can't wait to read more.

    TDM

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    Carole Anzolletti 4 years ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth

    TDM, thank you so very much for commenting and complimenting...this one came during a storm of sweat and conviction. I am glad you find it amazing. Thank you again. :)

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    TheDailyMessenger 4 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

    Well Carole,

    amazing poem, truly amazing

    TDM

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