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Updated on February 1, 2016
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You came to me

When I needed you

The most

My loving friend

A long lost hope

You helped me

With things

That I had feared

You gave me a voice

And an ear to hear

I loved you deeply

You were my closest friend

I will miss you dearly

Until we meet



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      Caroline Marie 24 months ago

      Thank you Gypsy. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 24 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely sentiments.

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      Caroline Marie 24 months ago

      Thank you Manatita. :)

      Thank you Michael. :)

      Thank you Ruby. :)

      Thank you Shanmarie. :)

      Thank you Vellur. :)

      Thank you Frank. :)

      Thank you Marlene. :)

      Thank you Flourish. :)

      Thank you Eric. :)

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      Eric Dierker 24 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Beautiful. I just love it - it tells a story but leaves me meandering in thought.

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      FlourishAnyway 24 months ago from USA

      Sad and thankful poem. Makes me wonder about the backstory.

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      Marlene Bertrand 24 months ago from Northern California, USA

      This is a very touching poem. I enjoyed reading it, feeling the loss, yet the hope of meeting again.

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      Frank Atanacio 24 months ago from Shelton

      very warm and heartfelt.. loved it

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      Nithya Venkat 24 months ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed.

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      shanmarie 24 months ago

      Your words touched my heart. What a lucky friend you had to have you and vice versa.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 24 months ago from Southern Illinois

      There's nothing as precious as a true friend, you expressed it beautifully!

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      cleaner3 24 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      very heartfelt .... and real

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      manatita44 24 months ago from london

      A friend in need is a friend indeed! God in disguise. Charming poetry!