The Hem of My Sins

The hem of my sins. What a way to compare your sins. So creative. And so softly you refer to them. Glad your true self is at piece. What a lovely poem and of your way of expression.

I love this beautifully written poem !

Vote up and more !!!

Hi Audrey... Beautiful and so heartfelt... how often have we all been here...

Hugs and Blessings

Love this. It makes me think of how with each "sin", we were brought to the "person" we have become. Beautifully, perfectly flawed, and with age...OK with it, maybe even enjoying it. Thank you, Audrey. Beautiful.

I came across this when I was pondering over my own sins. Thanks Audrey!

Beautiful! "I invite in each sin and allow it room to sit awhile to remember them all and to recall that each was born out of my own unhappiness." ...Brilliant! It's only then when we realize we are to blame, that we can sincerely ask for forgiveness. Love it :)

what a peaceful poem...this envelops me with warmth...

And how important that peace is, knowing that our sins are forgiven through Jesus. You write so well.

Incredible ending to an incredible poem! Jamie

This is a really beautiful poem we can all relate to. Your way with words is sometimes astounding. Voted up and beautiful.

Expressive... Feel an outburst coming out! Just falling in love with your poetry day by day! Great work

Love :)

Rahul

So beautiful. Voted up and Awesome.

A great hub;I loved it.

Take care Audrey and enjoy your day.

Eddy.

Oh so beautiful Audrey, it touched some cords within me and I kind of sympathized. That unhappiness that could have led to things unpleasant, when we think back, they still produce some emotions. Thanks for writing.

Gosh, that's beautiful. You have a way with words, cliché though that compliment may be. Your word choices are so awesome!

A beautiful glimpse into the mediation of the sinner in all of us. Gorgeous!

AMazing poem Audrey. a fave :)

Beautifully done, loved this Audrey and voted up.

very very well done Audrey :)

This could be my Audrey-fav! We women are so busy forgiving everybody else - we often forget to forgive ourselves! Bravo, my well balanced, intelligent hubbie-buddy!

Oh Audry this is so special and touched me..all of us carried the burden of sin for a while until it is washed away, forgiven, and thus a new life is born, giving us much peace. I really loved this. So creative in every way.

Sunnie

Very beautiful and expressive. Loved it. Voted up.

Just wonderful Audrey. Voted up and beautiful. Actually your words and the flow of the poem did make me feel so peaceful.

Your words always go so well together. Great Poem.

Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

Such captivating words, and so beautifully written. In His Love, Faith Reaper

so beautiful what can I say.. BRAVO..

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Debbie

Beautiful and so true Audrey...