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The Liar And The Ugly Woman

Updated on July 2, 2012
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The Liar And The Ugly Woman

(This poem is about people who take advantage of other people during their weak moments.)

The ugly woman

Expects one beautiful lie

That can change her ugly truth

Even if only for a while.

The liar

Expects to sleeze a little change

In exchange he can lie

And work his charms for a while.

If only there was but one

Who thought her not ugly

Not many but one

Just one average John Doe!

"I could do that" -

Thought the liar

"Stupid woman,

What you offering in return though?"

"I have some change,

If that's what you're asking

They're not much use to me

I'm alone and done saving, so..."

The liar lies his way into her heart

He tells her not ugly

And takes it back right away

But brings a moment's joy smoothly.

The ugly woman, ever monotheistic her bed

She gives the liar everything

The next morning he runs away,

Never again to be seen shortly...

Off the liar goes

To a tropical holiday

Beautiful beaches and even more "bitches"

The liar wants to buy love, with the ugly woman's money.

The liar expects one hot woman

Who would be loyal to him

In exchange of the wealth he got lying his way

By making fly with debased honey!

Bitches come, bitches go

Soon he finds himself desolate so

The liar tries lying and trying

But no one falls for that shit anymore...

The ugly woman carries on

Waiting for the liar

He ought to come back once he runs out

Not for her, but her money he adores!

Somebody ought to tell her again

For once, that she ain't ugly!

Somebody has to be man enough,

Even if so vile and guile.

The ugly woman

Expects one beautiful lie

That can change her ugly truth

Even if only for a while.

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      IN2Deep 5 years ago

      It's not up to any of us to judge others on looks or anything else.We are here to help teach and guide others not to take advantage of them. I believe everyone male and female has positive and negatives about them. There are both men and woman who take advantage of each other for there own gain which is what makes them ugly. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder and only skin deep. Ugly goes right to the bone.

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Thank you for the comment rcrumple. Glad you decided to stop by. :)

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Tis a sad story, but so true. Ugly woman could be interchanged with abused wife in a gender match, or genders and places could be switched as often it's the man awaiting the woman he feels only wants his money but gives him the moments of pleasure he so deeply desires. Hard and brutal works tremenously well here to influence the storyline and the hopelessness of the situation. Fantastic!

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!

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      Gray Baker 5 years ago from Tampa

      That's how ugly I am. Just kidding, about the woman, NOT the ugly!

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      You're a woman??? Really? One wouldn't guess from your prof pic. :)

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      Gray Baker 5 years ago from Tampa

      Nice. I don't know good poetry from a sack of batteries, but I could relate somehow ... as an ugly woman. Lies we gotta tell ourselves sometimes.

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Yes, ugly is all around. It is in all of us. Thank you for the comment EuroNinila. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Awesome, loved this. There's ugly all around is in different forms, unfortunately.

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Thank you for your intellectual remarks. Appreciated.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, I loved this. Ugly is in the eye of the beholder. Beauty is only skin deep...I love Will's comment...Cheers

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      @lifehealpraise Why thank you! :)

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      lifehealpraise 5 years ago from South Florida

      Awesome, well said, so true!

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      Virginia Davis 5 years ago from Navarre, Florida

      It is my pleasure! =)

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Why thank you Virginia! :)

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      Virginia Davis 5 years ago from Navarre, Florida

      This is absolutely amazing!

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Thank you tobusiness. Yes, you're right, people should be more practical than emotional when it comes to choosing partners.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      This poem cleverly tells of an ugly truth, but of the two the liar is the ugliest.

      the so called ugly woman can obviously afford to enhance her looks so instead of wasting her money on cheats and liars she should have a little work done, and find herself a real man.

      Nice work

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      myownlife 5 years ago from london

      so called the ugly woman lie has been depicted beautifully but I totally believe @shiningirisheys,

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      @Mhatter99 Did you now?

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Thank you Shining.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Once, at a photo shoot, I watched a model putting on her make-up. I learned a world about beauty.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      The lie is that she believes she is ugly. The liar is him.

      voting up

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      WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      "...some exquisitely gorgeous women have very ugly hearts!!"

      And I dated most of them at one time or another.

      Some of the most desirable women are not 'eye candy' at all. They are extremely attractive, not due to physical beauty, but because they enchant with who they are, and how they think.

      Give me a girl like that every time, and if she happens to be pretty too, who am I to argue? (I happened to have it all with my lady!)

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Thank you Ryem.

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      Paula 5 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      matthew.....OK.....I understand......Same goes for very handsome, muscular men......It's easier to be a creep when you have the looks and body women will make absolute fools of themselves for......I always want to shake them and say, "Girl, snap out of it!.....it's his heart and his intelligence that matters the very most!!"

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      This poem is awesome.

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      Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

      I know i was not commenting on physical beauty.

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      Paula 5 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      How sweet of you Will...but totally un-REAL.....Maybe you have eyes for only YOUR beautiful woman and this is a good thing....but there are hoards of ugly women.....inside and out......fact is...some exquisitely gorgeous women have very ugly hearts!!

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      @Will Starr BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      @Matthew Weese This poem does not refer to any individual. This is about people who take advantage of other people during their weak moments.

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      Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

      I guess your more truthful than most, I stand corrected....LOL

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      Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

      hahahahahha!!!!!!LOL.....I guess since ya put it that way.

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      WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      "(Willstarr is a "liar" there are plenty of ugly woman!!!!)"

      Not after you get past sixty, or the bar is closing.

      ^_*

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      Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

      I wonder, who this Poem refers too? or if it is out of your imagination?....Does it have any significance? (Willstarr is a "liar" there are plenty of ugly woman!!!!)

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      WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      There's no such thing as an ugly woman.

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Thank you Kabhijita. Glad you liked it.

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      Abhijit Aswath 5 years ago from India

      Very bold issue addressed in a gripping way. Great piece of writing, triggers sad emotions.