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The Love That Sadly Got Away - Sad Poetry

Updated on July 28, 2012

It could have been the love I am waiting for

The unique feel of the fresh warm wind in winter

Or the unusual cold breeze in the summer's day

But indeed it was just a dream

A dream I always held in my heart

Like the teddy I like to hold on to

Your words are music in my silent nights

They are my guiding light when I am sad

I could have died long before

But you gave me smile and hope

Then suddenly you said goodbye

Things will be better for us, you said

Then I wonder how could it be better

When I was sad and crying

Yes, I understand what you said

But at times it is hard to fathom the words

The heart can't understand what the mind wants to do

How could you just gave up a love

And never fight for the love that was

Maybe you're right, it is the best for us

But who knows what could have happened

We all know what true love can bring

Its only the lovers can feel

The pain a failed love can bring

Specially for a true love

The love that sadly got away.


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The Love That Sadly Got Away - Below is a beautiful image of a yellow rose in full bloom, like a love withering away but keep coming back where it belongs

Rate my poetry so that I will be inspired to write more, Thank you!


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      prettydarkhorse 2 years ago from US

      Thanks brakel, Take care.

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      Audrey Selig 2 years ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

      Lovely poem . I came back to read it again Maita. It is sad but has great meaning. I can picture the love, and the flower adds a great deal to your concept. Maita is such a pretty name. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Blessings, Audrey

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      SweetiePie 2 years ago from Southern California, USA

      Your poetry makes me think about love. Sometimes it is unrequited, and that can be quite sad. However, I guess the positive thing to come out of that is if a person does not reciprocate, you cannot invest too much time in that.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Ah! quite a touching poem. Much love.

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      prettydarkhorse 3 years ago from US

      Thanks, much love, take care always.

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      Audrey Selig 3 years ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

      What a lovely poem Maita. I enjoy love stories, even the ones with sad endings. You have a way with words, and I Love your user name. You compared love to a withering flower which is a great comparison. I will share this hub Maita. Thanks for sharing. Blessings Audrey

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      prettydarkhorse 5 years ago from US

      Thanks Rob! Good to see you! I just woke up, will make me track cookies now! I am slowly setting the feelings free! Take care as well! Maita

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      Rob Welsh 5 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      - BUMP!! -

      And yes I agree with every other comment. The love that sadly got away... was sadly not meant be, but you know when you know love, some love can only be... when it lives free.

      And Maita.. tracking cookies also work well! Take care always.. PD

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      muvhen 6 years ago

      love it, nice poem

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      A beautiful heart felt poem, wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing your words.

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      prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US

      Thanks the fix, Maita

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      the fix 6 years ago

      That was beautiful! Keep writing and sharing your poetry!

      You are always and in so many ways an inspiration!

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      prettydarkhorse 7 years ago from US

      Hmm, you will run away with your bike Mick, then for sure you will come back, Thank you for not 'getting away' so fast, hehe, Maita

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      I would never want to "get away".

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      prettydarkhorse 7 years ago from US

      Thanks all for commenting, Hi Patricia, the friend who sent me that one also told me, LOL< I just keep it that way, didn't edit it... Thanks Patricia and everyone, I appreciate your comments..Maita

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      2patricias 7 years ago from Sussex by the Sea

      Very bitter-sweet poem, and well written.

      Sorry to tell you this, but I think the flower in the photo is really a marigold, not a rose. But it is still very pretty.

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      prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Good to see you again, Maita. This is a beautiful hub from you. I love your poem. Touch my heart indeed. Thank you very much. I give my VOTE UP for you. ~prasetio

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      Madison 7 years ago from NYC

      A beautiful and heartwarming poem. As usual your work is profound. Thank you PDH for sharing this lovely piece:)

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      TattoGuy 7 years ago

      Only just found this Poem, you ladies on here have a talent at writing poems, I love this one.

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      Money Glitch 7 years ago from Texas

      Hey Maita, I saw your new avatar in the forums and decided to stop by to see what was going on. Woo wee the new avatar is hot and mysterious. Hum mum love will do you that way.:) Rating the poem up! Take care! :)

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      theirishobserver. 7 years ago from Ireland

      Nice poetry....wonderful woman.....hublicious hubber....the writing gets better and better.....keep up the good work.......Irish

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      Steve Andrews 7 years ago from Tenerife

      Very beautiful and emotional words! Voted up!

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      DavePrice 7 years ago from Sugar Grove, Ill

      Its hard to find the words the heart wants to say, but you've made beautiful work of it - beautiful.

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      TINA V 7 years ago

      This is a beautiful, but a sad poem. I like what you wrote, "But at times it is hard to fathom the words;

      The heart can't understand what the mind wants to do"

      You seem to be a strong lady. I hope you have already moved on with your lost love. I guess, it would be lovelier the second or nth time around. Have a great weekend!

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      prettydarkhorse 7 years ago from US

      Hi! Thanks for all your comment. I appreciate it, Maita

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      Rebecca E. 7 years ago from Canada

      lovely, very lovely, I am pleased to finally read it, and wish I had read it sooner, you are so talented. This is so heartfelt.

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      saddlerider1 7 years ago

      A poem of beauty yet sadness between the lines of tears rolling down your cheeks sweet lady. I hope you have love again and moving forward. Here is a link to another hubber who writes of love, simply beautiful like yours. Enjoy

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      mythbuster 7 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

      Beautiful and bittersweet, Maita. Thank you for sharing this.

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      Tony McGregor 7 years ago from South Africa

      Le chagrin d'amour! Love lost so sweetly expressed.

      Thanks for sharing these heartfelt words.

      Love and peace


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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Aw, this was sad yet so beautiful too, Maita. Lovely sentiment in here. Ruminating on love lost, or dining on ashes as I sometimes see it. We have been there in one way or another, moi friend. Love can be a menhir splendid thing, and then again, love can be a bitch too! Heh! Cheers!! :)

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      Me, Steve Walters 7 years ago from The Big

      We search for the right words to say...when love changes. But, ultimately it is too hard to explain. Yet, you manage to describe all the feelings and emotions rather well within this great and sad poem. PDH...I hope you are well...and that this is merely a recollection of thoughts...and of nothing that is current! Signed, Your friend, MPM

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      tom hellert 7 years ago from home


      MMm Neandethal Tom sayFire good- pretty girl make pretty words MMMM Me like pretty words make Tom feel good MMMm

      Me write like this because compared to your pretty words me talk like cave man anyway...

      nice Words ,,,Fire Good *hehe* good job PDH


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      Nellieanna Hay 7 years ago from TEXAS

      Ultimately sweet and poignant, dear lady. I hardly know what to say in response to the feelings expressed, except that expressing them has power to heal, so long as you allow it to begin to relieve the anguish and not let it build up inside. You find your next steps in God's plan for you as you begin to release the lost one. You can heal and go on, deepened by the love and experience. Remember, if it's real it will be there. And unreal is always unfulfilling. No one can cancel the love YOU have felt.

      Beautiful poem.

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      Shari 7 years ago from New York, NY

      I love when you write your poems.. write more!!! Your words are beautiful :)

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      KewlWriter 7 years ago from United States

      Sounds like its applicable to me and my my ex-almost boyfriend. Really beautiful

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      prettydarkhorse 7 years ago from US

      Hi Big TC, thanks and you take care!

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      Beautiful, Maita!!!

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      sofs 7 years ago

      Maita, The cry of the heart is poignantly beautiful.

      I hope you did not have to go through all that.

      My Love to you.

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      Loves To Read 7 years ago

      Maita what a beautiful heartfelt poem. It is very wistful and deep and only comes from a heart that has felt that kind of pain. I pray that you are well as i see that you have not made any reply to your comments.

      I will keep you in my prayers, beautiful lady.

      Love and Hugs

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      Tilecleaninghub 7 years ago

      Nice poem Maita.

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      viryabo 7 years ago

      A beautiful poem Pretty, it reminds me of something that happened to me in the past, many 'light years away'.

      Reminds me of the song "The love i lost was a sweet love...."


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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      No Maita! Here I am! Right here Maita! This is a really beautiful poem Maita.

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      fred allen 7 years ago from Myrtle Beach SC

      What Dave said!

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      Dave Mathews 7 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

      Ate Maita; Our Lord gives us a love that will never leave us. Grab hold and never let go.

      KUYA Dave.

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      Hello, hello, 7 years ago from London, UK

      That was beautiful and I hope it wasn't true for you.

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      Mr Nice 7 years ago from North America

      kumustaka Maita,

      Lovely but sad poem. I like your new avatar.

      ~Oftentimes we say goodbye to the person we love without wanting to. Though that doesn’t mean that we've stopped loving them or we've stopped to care. Sometimes goodbye is a painful way to say I love you. ~by Kezia

      ~You taught me how to love; you taught me how to live; you taught me how to laugh; you taught me how to cry, but when you left, you forgot to teach me how to forget you. ~by Hendie

      Take care and good night.

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      Pamela Oglesby 7 years ago from United States

      Miata, This is a very beautiful and sad poem. You did a wonderful job in writing with such feelings.

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      DoorMattnomore 7 years ago

      hey pretty, I like the pic alot, and your description. Lost love, kept secrets, words held close to your heart. You never knwo "what might have been" but you do know how to love. Somebody else will come along, to keep. I hope your well, this is a lovely poem.

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      butterfly Tattoo 7 years ago from Dallas Texas

      Nice to see people are still writing good poetry

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      anglnwu 7 years ago

      Lovely poem, infused with poignancy and longing. It's hard to get over lost love, especially one you hold dear. Rated beautiful.

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      breakfastpop 7 years ago

      What a beautiful and very sad poem. Tell me it wasn't something you went through. I hope not.

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      India Arnold 7 years ago from Northern, California

      This is wonderful Maita. You always help me remember the important things in this life.

      Beautiful and UP.


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      RevLady 7 years ago from Lantana, Florida

      A lovely poem Maita. It is touching.

      Love, peace and joy in Him,

      Forever His,

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      Sam 7 years ago from Tennessee

      up & beautiful! well written, meaningful may God give you strength...

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      ankigarg87 7 years ago

      very lovely poem i enjoyed a lot while reading thanks for the poem

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      xixi12 7 years ago from Everywhere but here. In the truest sense, freedom cannot be bestowed; it must be achieved. You can never be truly free till you have the discipline to manage it.

      Lovely poem, very heartfelt. Hope you did not lose anyone close to you.