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Twisted Love Poems: Love Slave

Updated on June 14, 2013
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I don't know if it's

The subtle suggestion of your lips

Or the crook of your smile

But I have no power

Against your cunning wiles


With the simple turn of your head,

You impose upon me

The full measure of your undeniable will

I am captured completely

Your vessel to fill


Bound to your whims

A puppet attached

To strings.

I am beholden to perform

Whatever act your command brings


And you know this completely.

For you use me

To fulfill your every desire

I am your love slave

Ready to face Hell's fire


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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Some people can be your kryptonite, and when you meet them the best policy is to run away.

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Don't I know it. I have done the craziest things in the name of love. Fortunately I have someone who doesn't take advantage of my devotion.

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      A true lover has full control but never manipulates their love despite the power they have.

      Beautiful poem.

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      Support Med. 5 years ago from Michigan

      Well written. Your last line said it well, as this is the kind of love that can lead you most anywhere. v/r

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      HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      ha ha, well I don't think to many people have figured it out! lol

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      HattirMattieMae shhhhhhhh. Don't tell people that, then my cover is blown.

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I always try to write something people can relate to. I feel it makes my style of writing more interesting.

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      HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Ha ha....Mystery..is not so hard to figure out. I have a friend that likes to use Mystery against me, I usually figure him out quite well. lol

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      sarcasticool 5 years ago from New Zealand

      Nicely written. Hmmm true those comments lol

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I a man of mystery, you can spend a lifetime and still never figure me out. lol

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      It's amazing the power someone can have over you when you fall in love with them.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      very interesting, Philly! Who knew that vanilla wasn't your favorite flava'! Good for you! Beauuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful poem!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Love enslaves, and we are always ready to be apprehended by the power of our love. Very powerful expression. Beautiful writing.