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The Nightmare

Updated on March 29, 2012
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It creeped up on me

From nowhere

A sign

My heart sank

Somewhere lost

Not to be defined

Winds that flung me

Tossed me aside

A beast came at me

No where to rest

No where to hide

His evil smirk

Made me sick

Thinking I was fragile

He tried eating me alive

I was too strong for him

Beyond that

I survived

The place of sleep

I did detest

It became my reality

My life a test

Where chances are met

A living protest

Nightmares come and go

In the darkest nights

Waking up the next morning

Happy to be alive

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      carolinemd21,

      I like it a whole bunch!!! One of your finest works.

      There is a lot of your poem that I can certainly relate too.

      Thank you for sharing.

      Blessings!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

      P.S. I really like you profile picture, it looks great.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Princess thank you very much for your sweet comment and compliment. Cheers. :)

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      very cool, voted up

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Very nice young lady! I'm not a big fan of nightmares; thankfully I don't get too many.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      very nice, you have been hiding these poems till the right time , you naughty woman. this feels like one of my down days, a real nightmare.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Irob thank you for reading and the compliemnt. :)

      @ Hi Billy lol that's good you don't get many! Glad you stopped by. Thank you.

      @ Hi Michael thank you for reading and commenting. That's too bad you have down days like that. Wishing you the best.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Whoa, Glad it was only a nightmare. That lil' Dude looks scarry..Hee..Enjoyed..

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      Cheryl Simonds 5 years ago from Connecticut

      Whew, I'm glad you woke up! This one was very deep. Voted up and awesome.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Super and scary! Hate nightmares. The greatest thing is waking up and realizing everything is OK.

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Happy to be alive--yes! But such an awful picture, Caroline--It scares me, as I have had at least two dreams in my life with such beasts onstage. Good poem though!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Ruby haha yeah he is creepy! Thanks for reading. :)

      @ Cheryl Thanks!

      @ Gypsy yes it is! Thanks for reading and commenting.

      @ Hi Jim LOL that picture is scary isn't it? Must have been some scary dreams! Thanks for reading and the comment. :)

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Dark imagery here Caroline. Everything ok? You make me glad i don't dream very often - and have nightmares less! Same amazing style, girl!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi ImKarn I love to write about dark and light stuff keeps it interesting. I get bored writing all fluff and happy thoughts and need to switch it up once in awhile! Thanks for the compliment!

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...this is a world class presentation Caroline with that beautiful painting and your writer's writer words - so impressed with this one and it's one of the best pieces of poetic composition I've read in these hubpages in quite some time - lake erie time 3:09pm

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....I like your comment right above me to Leslie about switching it up - good for you - now I will be posting this poetic gem to my FB group Let's just talk music or cinema with a direct link back here and the invitation is still open and always will be if you care to join us there - that would be awesome - sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 3:10pm

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...also - lol - I have a song in mind because of your poem here and the painting too - that I would like to dedicate to you at the group - I can't tell you what one it is - but you will love it ......

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      sam209 5 years ago

      Well you know I love your work Caroline! Some of the greatest writers are the ones who show their side of light and their dark side! I've read many of your poetic themes and I must say I'm entertained by both temperaments! Good work as usual!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A great theme for a hub. I hope you don't get nightmares like this too often! Voted it up.

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      The Frog Prince 5 years ago from Arlington, TX

      Wow! Cat's got my tongue. A rather disturbing work or maybe I am reading it wrong.

      The Frog

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Thank you Epi for all of the warm comments! I wonder what song it is...lol. I will check out your FB page. I took a break from it for awhile but see what it's all about. Thank you for the invite. :)

      @ Sam thank so much for your kind comment and compliment! You're words are very entertaining also!

      @ Blossom LOL No, I don't. Thanks for all of your support dear lady. :)

      @ The Frog no you read it right. LOL. Thanks for your comment and read.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      damn this was good I loved it!!!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Frank thanks for stopping by my hubs. I am flattered by your compliments. Love your poetry too!

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      Secret lies 5 years ago from Redlands California

      Tjs is perfectly beautiful. Love the end just like my start.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Secret :)

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      Dolley 2 years ago

      Thnnkiig like that is really amazing

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      Caroline Marie 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Dolley. :)

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