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The Only Thing That is Damaged

Updated on January 15, 2012

Harsh wind banging on my window leaving a spill of light breeze creep in between the opening and I shiver
The trees I hear whistling harshly leaving bird hid in their nest
Clouds in high speed spread rapidly hiding the moon
Street fulfill with traffic, train roar the track
Rumbling the ground, vibrating through my wall and ceiling
So lousy as this broken heart sounds

Tears walks my eyes, I thought of our promise
The promise to love each other until the sky falls
And the earth slits open
But then I learned today, promise that we made
Was never true; Oh how my heart quiver, body shaken by unfaithful truth

Although the promise we made is broken
And the sky is still there and the earth is still whole
But the love is gone
And the only thing that is damaged
Is my heart

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      you're welcome, Chanroth

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      You evoke sad feelings, but your writing is beautiful.

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi PDX, thanks!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      i liked this a lot Chanroth

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi raciniwa, thank you! I just contact the hub team and they had certified it original! I'm happy now! lol, :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      don't be upset, your work is original...our experiences are ours alone...

      so sad, yet beautifully written...

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hello everyone, thank you so much for reading, voting and commenting. I am a little upset right now because I receive a message saying that this hub of mine has been duplicated on another webpage and I am very upset because this should be the only hub on the web. Very upset. :(

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      kevins blog52 5 years ago from southern Indiana

      Beautiful poem chanroth, I voted up and beautiful.

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      Crystar 5 years ago

      Beautiful. I enjoy reading your work.

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      qwin 5 years ago from Malaysia

      nice write.. !

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      That was so beautiful!!!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      You write so wonderful....I voted way up..debbie