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The Purge of my Atlantic - A Poem

Updated on February 1, 2012

Have I dumped my soul, out of my hole, and left the raging waves inside me,

Have I left my head, out of my head, and let the conflict still move on,

Have I let my life, duel with strife, and leave me upside down,

Have I dumped my soul, out of my hole, and left the raging waves inside me?


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      CMarie 3 years ago from York, Maine

      yup.............................................................................................!!!!!

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      Adrian Lavelle 5 years ago from Galway, Ireland

      Thank you all so much for the comments, I just wrote what I was feeling at that moment and laughed, it semed to work =)

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      gisseppi 5 years ago

      random !

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      Cathy 5 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

      Agree. This was really nice.

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      I love this, wow, and I know how this feels. You have captured turmoil of the mind and the sea sickness of strife. Love it, my votes to you, Adrian.