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The Right to Disappear

Updated on June 19, 2013

You have the right to disappear

It's not a sin to change your mind

I tell myself for each love that's lost

There's someone else to find

I'd never planned on letting go

So this is new to me

When did home become the place

You didn't want to be?

And when did I become someone

That is so easy to replace?

When I look at you I already see

An unfamiliar face







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      LipstickAbuser 

      5 years ago

      This is so Beautiful & sad :)

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Nice. short and sweet. Good use of rhyme.

    • rust profile image

      rust 

      6 years ago from East Texas Woods

      I like loosely following this girl around carozy. She could become something.

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      carozy 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      Could be song lyrics. Voted up.

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      jazzy913 

      6 years ago

      Funny how people change and we no longer recognize them. You convey that very well. Love it.

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      Kara Monterey 

      6 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks!

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      Hubert Williams 

      6 years ago

      Very good rhyme, I love it.

    • Koshaugh profile imageAUTHOR

      Kara Monterey 

      6 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thank you!

    • rust profile image

      rust 

      6 years ago from East Texas Woods

      I love your cadence, have been reading some 0f your poems. Keep writing, you're very good!

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      Pamela Oglesby 

      6 years ago from Sunny Florida

      Sounds like you are better off with him out of your life.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      It's never easy when love goes wrong. If they leave without a good-bye they weren't worth the trouble to begin with. As hard as it may be we just have to go on.

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I'm sorry your feeling so sad. This person does sound like a jerk just walking away not saying a thing.

      Voted up and interesting, Joyce

    • Koshaugh profile imageAUTHOR

      Kara Monterey 

      6 years ago from Indianapolis

      Very sad:( Thank you!

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      Sueswan 

      6 years ago

      Hi Kosaugh

      "When I look at you I already see

      An unfamiliar face"

      Isn't it sad when a loved one turns out to be a stranger.

      Voted up and awesome.

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      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Aww! He's a jerk. This one was sad.

    • Koshaugh profile imageAUTHOR

      Kara Monterey 

      6 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks!

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      fjpteach 

      6 years ago from Humble, TX

      Love it Koshaugh! This is how I feel right now!

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