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Silent Train

Updated on December 03, 2015

I hear you

Every night

From my window

Summer darkness

Musty warmth

You come like a ghost

All alone

I listen

To your whispers

Echoing through

The wind

Visiting me

Like a

A comforting friend

I wait for you

To take flight

Then like a phantom

You disappear

Again

Into the night

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      Perspycacious 16 months ago

      Nice seeing your quality here again. Bravo!

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      Caroline Marie 16 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Perspycacious. It's nice seeing you again also. :)

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      Eric Dierker 16 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Very nice indeed. Brought back some memories.

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      Caroline Marie 16 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Eric for stopping by. :)

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      Frank Atanacio 16 months ago from Shelton

      I love the soft words here in your poetry carolinemd21

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      Caroline Marie 16 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Frank for stopping by :)

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      FlourishAnyway 16 months ago from USA

      Well done, although imp not sure I would personally appreciate living too close to the tracks.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 15 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Loved this poem. Made me think of a dear friend I lost...

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      Caroline Marie 15 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Flourish, thank you for stopping by. Yes, sometimes it can be a little too much in the summertime. :)

      Hi Gypsy, thank you for reading. so sorry to hear about your friend. I hope you found comfort in reading this. :)

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      A real treasure and a real bond, this closeness. Thoughtful and intimate poem.

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      Caroline Marie 14 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Manatita. :)

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