The Slow Touch of my Finger
I will start at your hairline
with the lightest touch
the tip of my finger
will rest upon your skin
like morning light on a meadow.
And as dew runs down
the tender stalk of new life
erotic burning green
I will trace your flesh
from your crown to the tip of your ticklish toe
Inhale, exhale, relax
and feel my finger slowly caress
slowly, teasing
over the goddess lines, curves
forehead, nose, pulsing swollen lips
Your hot breath dampens
my line down your chin
down to the hollow of your neck
sensing the quickening beat
sensing the bodies heat
Follow your collar bone
gently to your shoulder
swirl there, swirl
like a breeze disturbing a feather
and send it down, down
Into the crook of your elbow
between the blue threads of your wrist
into your palm
along tender fingers
and held by a spark, fingertip to fingertip
You’ve been holding your breath
breathe, feel, hold on
as I trace my way back
back to pause for a swirl
back to the collar bone, and then
And then, tremble, breathe
as my touch floats down
down slowly, gently
over the rise, the swell
and electric white against your hardness
Down, down the softness now
down the panting belly
at your navel, swirling, swirling
run my finger over your pelvis
touch, caress, and down
Down over your creamy thigh
inside your knee
rolling over your hills, over your calves
inside your ankle, aching, tickle
tip of your toe, my finger on your flesh
You are trembling my love
on fire, panting
I smell your need
but make you wait, patient
as I slowly, slowly run my finger up
Up, up
over the excited bumps
rising on your flushed skin
over your calves, inside your knees
inside your thighs
I trace you there
I touch you, touch you
flesh, folds, flower
my fingers on your skin
on you, over you, in you
You see, patience is a virtue my love
wine to be taken in small sips
for my fingers only traced a path
a path I will again slowly follow
follow with eager aching lips
Comments
This should be X-rated. LOL Kidding....it is beautiful, Wayne!
Love good eroticism --nicely done!!
F***ing AWESOME!
And YES - i was holding my breath!
Beautiful!!
That was intense! Well written and well paced - I enjoyed every moment.
Oh my . . .
Beautiful.
Wow! That was beautiful :) I enjoyed reading every word.
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Bill, I stepped lightly--but my toes were hanging over the edge of the cliff. :)
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Leslie, were you trying to say 'Fricking'? Lol. How are the goose bumps on those collar bones?
Fantastic,really enjoyed your words.
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Audrey, thank you for the compliment. A little eroticism is good for the heart...if you don't have a heart attack while writing it. (;
OMG, Wayne. This is so sexy! Your wife is a very lucky lady!
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Thank you Beth. I appreciate the compliment.
Breathe. Breathe. Deep breaths. So very nice. A massage of words. Patiently bringing forth pulsation. Carefully waiting to exhale...Excellent job my friend.
Kim
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DealForALiving, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the visit.
Well well Wayne, that was certainly erotic. You tread the fine HP censorship line very well without plunging over the edge :) but only just I think. I sometimes write something I think may not pass too. The descriptions here were perfect...as you can tell by the comments by the ladies. Well done.
Masterfully done, dear Wayne, and a genius of a piece of work. A beacon and a benchmark for foreplay leading to the acme of perfection in eroticism!
Wow, that's quite intense and passionately written. The wolf in Wayne had spoken! You held your readers breathless! :)
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Hi neighbor, Liz! Thank you sweetie!
Have you been snooping through our curtains Wayne? lol!
This one'll snap knicker-elastic at a hundred yards...and there was me worrying all year about publishing a pile of borderline writes currently gathering dust lol!
A fine line you've balanced this one upon, and if this doesn't work to get her engines revving then I don't know what will.
Could be useful for married couples experiencing winter in the boudoir.
Happy days!
R.Q.
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Thank you very much Eugene.
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John, I thank you for stopping by and dropping me a compliment.
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Hi, Sha. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. ;)
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Kim, thank you so much for dropping by. Always good to hear from you.
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Thank you Jodah. Sometimes you have to live life close to the edge.
P.S. Wayne - would never condone sex before marriage.
The first stanza I thought was quite a nice description of a caring, romantic gesture.
All the best with true happiness.
R.Q.
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Thank you, manatita. I appreciate the compliment.
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Cris, now you have me howling. :-)
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Romeo, knowing you, you probably have a file full that you could dust off that would leave the ladies breathless.
Voted up and beautiful. How shall I put it? This was erotically pleasurable.
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Thank you dear friend, Rasma.
Deeply intense and passionate.
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Thank you very much, Nikki.
Very nicely done. It was good enough to repeat again...
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Thank you, Deb.
Gypsy is right, how shall I put it? Wow? Too bold. Sexy. Of course. You bring us right to the edge yet stay within the borders. Very well done my friend.
Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting.
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Thank you Mary. Glad you enjoyed it. ;)
Sending this around again! Fabulous write!
Wayne, my hat is off to you. That is an incredible piece of work. The final verse was just perfect. Whew! Time for a cold shower. Well done.
Mmmmm poetry in motion, embracing form, not one word out of place. Beautiful.
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Thank you again Audrey. You are a dear.
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Margaret, I appreciate the wonderful compliment.
Beautiful seduction, just enough eroticism and never ever vulgar. It can be done! Marvelous accomplishment.
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Thank you Theresa. even I needed a cool shower after this one. :)
Just visiting you a bit!
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