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The Sun Shines Within Me

Updated on March 12, 2010

Rainy days

But the sun shines within me

And love is all around me

Feeling wet and free

Life full of comfortability

Away from my over analyzing insecurities

Sanity is a kinder place to play

A quiet place to see

Hearing nothing but the raindrops

And feeling them tickling my amused face


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      Karli Duran 8 years ago from Texas

      Thank you for all your comments. I don't know when I wrote this poem, but most of my poems aren't so "happy".

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      Joy56 8 years ago

      it sounds like you have paradise within yourself..... nice place to be.

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      DREAM ON 8 years ago

      Loved the poem and the picture.I love the rain and the sunshine

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      Eric Prado 8 years ago from Webster, Texas

      Very uplifting, great poem! Kudos!

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      alexandriaruthk 8 years ago from US

      beuatiful life isnt it? very positive poem!

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      Micky Dee 8 years ago

      Very pretty thoughts! Thank you!

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      Coolmon2009 8 years ago from Texas, USA

      Beautiful Poem :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 8 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      There is something about rainy days that can be quite delightful. The feeling of immersion, the constant sense of being "cleansed" of renewal. That re-awakening and re-affirmation. I enjoyed this.

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      Lita C. Malicdem 8 years ago from Philippines

      You have just shown the beauty of living in that short poem! Lovely photo to go with!

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      brethodge 8 years ago from USA

      Small but amazingly crafted.. nice poem of the eternal sunshine.. :-) i liked it!

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      aefrancisco 8 years ago from somewhere down the road

      nice one :) more please ...

      thanks in advance :)

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      Holly 8 years ago from Lone Star State

      Very pretty and nice way of describing rainy days :)


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      sophs 8 years ago

      Awwww, i love this it's so pretty, great work Figment :)

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      Rafini 8 years ago from Somewhere I can't get away from

      A nice look at a rainy day.

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      Faye Constantino 8 years ago from Florida

      This is lovely Figment. Rainy days are my favorite, too.

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      Michael Shane 8 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

      Nicely done.....

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      Laurel Rogers 8 years ago from Bishop, Ca

      Well done, Figment-and what a photo!

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      Ann Nonymous 8 years ago from Virginia

      Perfect piece for a rainy day and forecast such as it was today! Well done, figment! Inspired!

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      Keira  8 years ago

      I loved it, Beautiful writing. Great photo. Thanks for the lovely journey. Bless you my dear.:)

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      Julie Grimes 8 years ago from Columbia, MO USA