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Wasteland

Updated on September 25, 2012

The wasted years

The wasted thoughts

The nights left my heart

To burden

Cannot repair the damage

Of my wasted love

A heart dragged through

Grimy

Diseased

Mud

Left beaten

Left behind

Never thought it would end

Never thought you could make me

Feel cold

Never thought I would feel so

Abandoned

Never thought I would feel

So old

Left behind among all the rot

Left with your disease festering

Within

Leaving me

Have not

A burden wasteland lies here

No more to give

A testament to the ruin

Your heart left me

Skeletons

Lying near

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Frank thank you very much dear friend for reading and commenting. :)

      @ Hi Gypsy thank you very much for taking time out to read and comment my dear friend. :)

      @ Hi Blossom thank you very much for stopping by and commenting dear lady. :)

      @ Hi Mhatter thank you for stopping by and commenting dear friend. :)

      @ Hi Sue thank you so much for the compliment and comment dear friend. :)

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      "A heart dragged through

      Grimy diseased mud"

      Amazing imagery. It is terrible when someone we love does this or die we allow it to happen. Either way it hurts.

      Voted up and awesome

      Take care :)

      Voted up and awesome

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      This is a valuable warning. Thank you

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I could just about smell the dust and feel the wide, barren emptiness of the land all around. Great choice of image, too.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Know what a shattered heart feels like.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      this was actually pretty good and I love how the picture you posted sets you in the empty , baron mood great poem :)