The Woman on the Mountaintop: A Response to Bill's Challenge

This was a good reading for me, congrats for writing this beautiful poem.

A beautiful response to the challenge, lovely poem.

I can find no words to praise this fully.

It is in a class all by itself.

I could use a muse like this.

Angels are on the way to you this evening , Audrey. ps

I loved this Audrey. Everyone could use someone like that in their lives!

Audrey, this is so moving and beautiful, I hope that when I write mine I can do half as good and then I would be happy.

Voted up, UABI and shared.

Blessings and ((((Hugs))))

Shyron

Beautifully done! I especially love the last stanza!

I love that line about the words positioning themselves into platitudes. That's brilliant. Great poem!

Beautiful and expressive poem!

Rules or no rules---This is an excellent response to the challenge! Voted up!

An amazing response to Bill's challenge. Just beautiful! Sharing and pinning.

Nice work Audrey and good to see you posting here . I have to get some more work done here :-)

That was awesome Audrey! words can't say how great your poem was! wonderful!

This was simply beautiful. Thank you.

Beautiful poem, Audrey. This is a great response to Bill's challenge. I don't think there are any hard and fast rules and I loved reading this. That is what is so great about these challenges. The creativity in how they are responded to is so interesting. I love the last two lines of your poem. Just lovely.

Just the right poem to read before signing of for the night. Thanks.

Totally awesome poem, Audrey.

Short and yet so full of power and beauty in every line, every stanza. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but we are very alike, in some ways.

You will be God's Audrey, and I will be God's Manatita, naturally. Uniquely ourselves but both blowing kisses to infinity, and cascading beauty in the heart-beats of life. Om Shanti!

A beautiful answer to Bill´s challenge!

Beautiful poetry Audrey! Jamie

This is a very lovely poem, Audrey. I'm so glad that you contributed to the challenge!

Very nice. :)

This woman reminds of the verse "in quietness and confidence shall be my strength" So beautiful!

You've held our hearts aloft and let us see the beauty of your words and a beautiful love. A true classic love poem with all the right ingredients. A superb reply to this challenge.

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

I loved this simple and straight forward one!

Hats off!

Audrey, you are that motion in poetry... aha.. see what I did here? LOL great poem and great response.. to that challenge

Awesome! You have a great mind here.

Superb! loved it.

Up voted. Very nice.

Up voted. Very nice.

Beautiful in so few words. The challenge, met.

Once again, a beautiful poem. I love the last stanza.

This poem is beautiful! Great job!

That is absolutely exquisite. Voted up +++ and sharing.

Audrey, now I know why as kids we flock to see the magic played by the magician in our street. With the same spirit and curiosity, I hurried to see and savor the magic spread by you. Your poetry is magnificent and I struggle with appropriate words to describe it's beauty. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful gem and a great poetic response to Bill's challenge. Voted up and shared.

I am blown away at the sheer beauty of your poetry, Audrey! My goodness, this is good as it gets.

Exquisite.

Up +++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

You met the challenge and beyond. Bravo!

Audrey, your poetry is always beautiful. I love the way you build upon each stanza. You are a true poet...Thank you...

Again you say so much in so few words, Audrey. Beautiful and a great response to bill's challenge. These amazing contributions just keep on coming - brilliant!

Your talent is outstanding.

Ann

Now you've gone and done it, Audrey. You've got me with tears in my eyes and I still have work to do. The word beautiful does not do this poem justice. Thank you my friend.