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The two you's

Updated on August 16, 2012

Was it you that I fell for

Gave my soul right from the start

Or was it her that tricked me

Not considering my heart

Was it you that wanted children

Put our family on the map

Or was it her intention

To hold me in her trap

Do you know the other

That lives inside your head

Does it make you worry

With all the things she said

Which one did I marry

Support for all this time

Always saying sorry

And that blame was always mine

I hope that now we're over

You can leave that girl behind

So she can't hurt another

And only know the girl who's kind


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      MindyPickel 5 years ago

      This is just Wow

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Hey Tim thanks for the comment mate :)


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      timthechirpinbyrd 5 years ago from Newport News, VA

      Been through it myself. Very good. Life/Love experiences changes us. Your poem is a great read. Thanks for sharing.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Cheers AK :)

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      Joseph A K Turner 5 years ago from West Yorkshire

      cool beans as per usual bud, I can really feel your pain through your writing, keep it up!

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      well done, keep writing

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      Liz Walmoth 5 years ago

      Well written, Simba!

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Loved this, and you said it all so well. Well done.