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The whisper of the stars

Updated on August 2, 2012

The whisper of the star

We ran to Siam's islands
To leave behind our shame
Our souls were wounded angels
Two looking for the same

Born under the same heavens
Where the stars played out their games
Lets bring their souls together
So she can take his name

From distant lands across the globe
We were sat at the same bar
Feeling awe struck by each other eyes
Hearing giggling from the stars

As thunder roared and the lighting struck
We felt joy from deep within
I heard the stars whisper to themselves
Let the magic now begin

They sprinkled us with stardust
Whilst they danced around the moon

Giving us a temporary paradise
For they knew pain would come soon

If I had to give a reason
There was magic in that bar
When the storm swept in and the thunder struck

It was written in the stars


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    • Jackie Lynnley profile image

      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very good, I enjoyed this very much.

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Simba, i've been writing my whole life, and whenever i finish a piece, i end up editing it to death. My writing prof. once told me, write it, SEND (or turn it in), and put it out of your mind. your first effort is spontaneous, and usually your most natural best. I don't think you have to worry about that, your work is just great, and i can't wait to read more....again, go with your first instinct...its always the best. Take care my friend, great 'chatting' with you...good luck with hub pages.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thank you Dotti,

      Your words are so wonderful to hear as I've only been writing for a month or so and not really sure how to gauge my work, just cause I think it's all right I'm never sure if it is. :)


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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      oh my gosh you have talent! i think i like this one even more than Lions and spells. you weave such a romantic and magical mood in this poem one almost feels part of the poem...lovely. Voted up, Awesome, and Beautiful. Thank you for sharing your magic!! dotti