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Updated on April 15, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

I hear you falling

Drops splashing on my

Window pane

You come in a slow melody

I can hear the sound

You make your own music

A lightening storm

The sound of thunder

Born wild drum

A warrior with his sphear

Shaking the ground

Your slow lullaby

Notes on keys

Making my heart sing

Dances like wildfire

Throughout the terrain

When you get angry

Your drum beats harder

Tapping hard on the glass

You come alive and strong

Your drops wash everything away

Feeding the soul of the ground

You are my romantic lover

Coming back to me

Making the nights last longer

I long for you all the time

With an elusive hunger


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Raciniwa thank you. I am glad you liked it. :)

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hmn...i can smell the soft earth as the rain soaks it...beautiful caroline...

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Hi Jim yes I do love the sound and smell especially in the spring and summer. Wow sideways. I never saw that before! Thanks for reading and stopping by. :)

      @ Hi Cheryl thank you very much!

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      Cheryl Simonds 6 years ago from Connecticut

      Rain, I love the rain and with a thunder storm, I am loving it. This is beautiful.

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Beautiful, Caroline. You must like the sound of rain. So do I, especially after a really long dry spell. I remember one time when the rain came down sideways: That's how hard the wind was blowing: A bit of a scary place, sometimes, where we humans live.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Hubert thank you for reading. :) Glad you are back on hubpages.

      @ Gypsy thank you lovely lady. :)

      @ Katrine thank you for your kind words. :)

      @ Ruby thank you very much for your constant support. You are amazing. :)

      @ Teylina so do I! Thank you for your kind words. :)

      @ Leslie thank you for your kind compliment and for reading. :)

      @ Vincent you even write comments like the true poet you are. Thank you for the kind words. :)

      @ LOL Thanks again Teylina.

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      Teylina 6 years ago

      Vincent, I think you said what I would have like to but couldn't the words. Rain, Caroline, is very, very special. Thank you for writing it and, Vincent, thank you for your comment.

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      Vincent Moore 6 years ago

      I love rain, snow, thunder and lighting as it caresses my roof, windows or pouring on myself as I walk amongst it. I feel cleansed when it touches my skin. To listen to the rain pitter patter on my window pane or roof as I rest takes me to other places, it's music to this poet's soul. Well done Caroline I felt your words.

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      Karen Silverman 6 years ago

      Mmmmmm...lovely poetry...the pitter patter...but, this could also veil so many different scenarios...brilliant, Caroline..

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      Teylina 6 years ago

      I, too, love the rain--especially on a tin roof. Such good imagery combined with feelings. Up, awesome and beautiful!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Caroline..I love to listen to the rain, making the earth fresh and clean..Well done...

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      KatrineDalMonte 6 years ago

      Caroline, what a beautiful poem. I find rain calming, and it gives me more inspiration, mainly for writing. Take care :-)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Your lovely poem came just in time. It's raining outside. Voted up and awesome. Love to hear the patter of rain on a tin roof.

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      Hubert Williams 6 years ago

      Very nice ode to the rain. I have experienced the thunder and lightning on many occasions and relished each moment. Thanks.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you Cyndi! :)

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      Cynthia B Turner 6 years ago from Georgia

      Hello Caroline, The soft rain is beautiful to fall asleep to and to wake up to. Your poem captures the rain it in all its forms so well. Lovely!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      That sounds sweet Michael good for you! Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Yes, caroline, the soft pitter patter of rain is a turn on when i am with the one I love. we snuggle together and feel the rhythym of the sound.