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Then She Let Go...

Updated on July 21, 2014
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Waiting..

The pain filling up every part

Every limb

Exhaustion

Just waiting for it to end

The aching emptiness

Leaving a wider void

Giving in to heart's illusion

A gentle comfort

Angel

Softly whispering

And her heart finally

Told her to let go

So

Then she let go...

Let her soul free

And then...

She began to fly

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Thank you Flourish that is so true. :)

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      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      In giving up control, one can often gain so much. Beautiful poem.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Hi Ruby thank you for your comment stopping by! :)

      Hi Enigmatic Me see we should, it's a good thing. LOL Thanks for reading. :)

      Hi The Frog Prince that's so funny I love that song. It is so cute! Thanks for that. :)

      Hi Gypsy thank you for your sweet comment, dear friend. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. I enjoyed the imagery of letting go and setting the soul free.

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      The Frog Prince 3 years ago from Arlington, TX

      Very nice. Here's a song that seems to fit.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBumgq5yVrA

      The Frog Prince

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      3 years ago from East Coast Canada

      We should all learn how to let go every once in a while. ..I know I do

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful! Letting go and flying free. Wonderful!

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Hi Frank thank you for the wonderful compliment. :)

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      wow.. stilled me..

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Thank you Sky. I have missed your poetry. Where have you been? :)

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      sky9106 3 years ago

      Quite beautiful Caroline.....

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Thanks Jim, yes it was meant to be. :)

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      James W. Nelson 3 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Not sure where she went when she let go but it sounded like quite a beautiful place....